Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Yes definitely when I chatting with my friend I always reduce my stress and chat with my friend can make me very happy.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
When I chat with my friends we always talk about our homework and something square things. Also we will talk about our family and and how will we do on weekend.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
I usually chat with only one friend because I think with only one friend we can deeply talk much things around us.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
Umm I prefer communicate with face to face because I think face to face more worn and it can make me more understand people meaningful and thinking when we face to face.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
Oh always when I meet something bad things I always talk to my friend and my friend always give me a many useful advice.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误,如“when I chatting”应为“when I chat”,且表达重复,如“chat with my friend”出现两次。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意时态和主谓一致。
Example: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me reduce stress and makes me very happy.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,如“something square things”不明确,且句子结构混乱。建议使用更具体的词汇,避免重复“and and”,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Example: When I chat with my friends, we usually talk about our homework, family matters, and our plans for the weekend.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答表达不够自然,存在语法错误,如“deeply talk much things around us”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并注意句子流畅性。
Example: I usually prefer chatting with just one friend because we can have deeper and more meaningful conversations.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,如“face to face more worn”不合适。建议简化句子,使用正确的词汇表达观点,并注意句子结构。
Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels warmer and helps me understand people's feelings and thoughts better.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误明显,如“a many useful advice”应为“a lot of useful advice”,且表达不够准确。建议注意冠词和数量词的使用,表达更具体。
Example: Yes, I often discuss problems with my friends, and they usually give me a lot of useful advice.
× Yes definitely when I chatting with my friend I always reduce my stress and chat with my friend can make me very happy.
✓ Yes definitely when I am chatting with my friend I always reduce my stress and chatting with my friend can make me very happy.
动词进行时态需要使用动词be动词加动词的-ing形式。这里缺少am,且后半句中chat应改为chatting以保持形式一致。
× Yes definitely when I chatting with my friend I always reduce my stress and chat with my friend can make me very happy.
✓ Yes definitely when I am chatting with my friends I always reduce my stress and chatting with my friends can make me very happy.
friend应使用复数形式friends,因为通常指多个朋友。
× When I chat with my friends we always talk about our homework and something square things.
✓ When I chat with my friends we always talk about our homework and some boring things.
square things用法不当,应使用形容词修饰名词,且表达无聊的意思应使用boring。
× Also we will talk about our family and and how will we do on weekend.
✓ Also we will talk about our family and how we will spend the weekend.
and重复使用错误,且句子结构不正确,疑问句结构不适合此处,应改为陈述句。
× I usually chat with only one friend because I think with only one friend we can deeply talk much things around us.
✓ I usually chat with only one friend because I think with only one friend we can talk deeply about many things around us.
much things应改为many things,因为things是可数名词。
× I usually chat with only one friend because I think with only one friend we can deeply talk much things around us.
✓ I usually chat with only one friend because I think with only one friend we can talk about many things deeply around us.
副词deeply的位置应放在动词后或句尾,且应加介词about。
× Umm I prefer communicate with face to face because I think face to face more worn and it can make me more understand people meaningful and thinking when we face to face.
✓ Umm I prefer to communicate face to face because I think face to face is warmer and it can help me better understand people's meanings and thoughts when we are face to face.
prefer后应加to不定式,communicate后不加with,face to face前不加介词,worn应为warmer,more understand应为better understand,people meaningful and thinking表达不清,应改为people's meanings and thoughts。
× Oh always when I meet something bad things I always talk to my friend and my friend always give me a many useful advice.
✓ Oh always when I meet some bad things I always talk to my friend and my friend always gives me a lot of useful advice.
some替代something用于复数名词,advice是不可数名词前不加a,give应加s与主语my friend一致。