Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and unclear in parts. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'and'. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. We usually share details about our daily routines and support each other through conversations.

Suggestion: Your answer covers the topic but lacks coherence and clear linking. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' properly and avoid repetition. Be specific about the experiences you share to enrich your answer.

Example: Usually, I chat about our studies and personal experiences. For example, I often share new things I have done during the week, which helps us understand each other better.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'also'. Avoid vague phrases and be specific about what you enjoy in group chats.

Example: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more enjoyable. We share funny stories and important updates, which helps us stay connected and informed.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer linking words like 'because' and 'although'. Also, avoid filler words and be concise.

Example: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to observe nonverbal cues like body language and facial expressions, which help me understand emotions better. Although social media is convenient, face-to-face communication is more effective.

Suggestion: Your answer has many filler words and unclear sentences. Try to be more direct and use linking words like 'because' and 'but'. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have disagreements about events or current situations. However, we quickly resolve our differences, which helps us understand each other better.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friends it makes me to feel relaxed and unwed and also it helps us to connect with my friends well while chatting and also chatting with my friends we usually share uh, most daily routines and the.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends; it makes me feel relaxed and unwound, and also it helps us connect well while chatting. Also, when chatting with my friends, we usually share most of our daily routines.

The phrase 'makes me to feel' is incorrect; after 'make', the verb should be in base form without 'to'. Also, 'unwed' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'unwound' meaning relaxed. The sentence was run-on and needed punctuation and restructuring for clarity.

× Uh, usually I talk about our studies and the experience that I had and I talk about my weeks, what are the things that I did. And also I tried to explain my experiences, which I, which I have never told to my friends before. And also this can help us.

✓ Uh, usually I talk about our studies and the experiences that I have had, and I talk about my week, what things I did. Also, I try to explain my experiences, which I have never told my friends before. This also helps us.

The sentence mixed past and present tenses inconsistently. 'Experience that I had' should be 'experiences that I have had' to indicate relevance to present. 'Tried' should be 'try' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Weeks' should be singular 'week' to match context.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people which is like very lovely and enjoyable. Especially I enjoy more while chatting in a group. We can see our funny things in a chat and also a serious and also we can get to know about some informations and updates with the friends like umm colors and the important things.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people, which is very lovely and enjoyable. Especially, I enjoy chatting more in a group. We can share funny things in a chat as well as serious topics, and we can get to know some information and updates from friends, like colors and other important things.

The word 'informations' is incorrect; 'information' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form. Also, 'a serious' is incomplete; it should be 'serious topics' or similar. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct quantifier use.

× Via social media, I prefer to, uh, communicate face to face because it allow me to observe a nonverbal cues like a body language and facial expressions which are important for understand emotions. For example, during conversation, seeing the other person's reaction helped me to respond better and well. Although social media is convenient, I can find face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because it allows me to observe nonverbal cues like body language and facial expressions, which are important for understanding emotions. For example, during conversation, seeing the other person's reaction helps me respond better. Although social media is convenient, I prefer face-to-face communication.

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'A nonverbal cues' is incorrect; 'cues' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'For understand emotions' should be 'for understanding emotions'. The sentence 'I can find face to face' is unclear and corrected to express preference.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends, uh, only for sometimes just because we have a lot of disagreements while we are talking about an event or personals or current situations. Umm uh, but also we solve it at soon and uh, we make and also make us to understand the better each other.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes, just because we have a lot of disagreements when talking about events, personal matters, or current situations. However, we also solve these issues soon, and it helps us understand each other better.

The phrase 'only for sometimes just because' is awkward; 'sometimes' alone suffices. 'Personals' is incorrect; 'personal matters' is appropriate. 'But also' is incorrectly used; 'however' fits better to contrast. 'Make and also make us to understand the better each other' is ungrammatical and rephrased for clarity and correctness.