Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'short masses'. Use complete sentences and explain your ideas more precisely. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about how chatting helps you communicate and maintain friendships.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is an efficient way to stay connected. For instance, I often send short messages or share interesting videos on social media, which helps us keep in touch despite our busy schedules.

Suggestion: Provide a more complete and coherent answer by avoiding incomplete sentences and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the topics you discuss. For example, mention both casual and serious topics and explain why you share posts with friends.

Example: I usually chat about various topics depending on the day. For example, I often share interesting posts or videos I find on Instagram or Facebook. Additionally, sometimes we have deep conversations about personal experiences or current events.

Suggestion: Improve fluency by reducing filler words and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Also, use the correct word 'company' should be 'companionship' or 'connection'.

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because it allows me to build a stronger connection. Moreover, one-on-one conversations are usually more meaningful and focused.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting vocabulary and sentence structure. Replace 'facial experience' with 'facial expressions' and 'short masses' with 'short messages'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'or something'.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it lets me observe facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand others' feelings better. However, social media is useful for quick messages or casual chats.

Suggestion: Try to use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your point clearly. Also, complete your example to make it more meaningful.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. However, I always try to resolve disagreements quickly so that our friendship remains strong. For example, we once disagreed on a topic, but after discussing it calmly, we reached an agreement.

× I think chatting is a very good way of communication like uh short masses there's it helps to savor time and on social media I talk to my friends, I send reels to them.

✓ I think chatting is a very good way of communication, like short messages; it helps to save time. On social media, I talk to my friends and send reels to them.

The phrase 'short masses' is incorrect; the correct term is 'short messages'. Also, 'savor time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'save time'. These are errors in word choice and quantifiers affecting clarity.

× There is no specific topic about what we chat, uh, on daily basis.

✓ There is no specific topic about what we chat about on a daily basis.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'about' after 'chat', which is necessary to complete the meaning. Also, 'on daily basis' requires the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Like I saw something interesting on the Instagram, Facebook, then I like to forward that read or post to them.

✓ Like, if I see something interesting on Instagram or Facebook, I like to forward that read or post to them.

The use of 'the' before 'Instagram' and 'Facebook' is incorrect; these are proper nouns and do not require 'the'. Also, 'then I like' should be 'I like' or 'I usually like' to fit the context.

× While I'm not a big fan of, uh, chatting in a group, so most of the time I like to chat uh, with the, a specific person that, uh, I have to do because I think that uh, chatting with the one person can help you to build a stronger company.

✓ While I'm not a big fan of chatting in a group, most of the time I like to chat with a specific person because I think that chatting with one person can help you build a stronger company.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions ('while' and 'so') and unnecessary fillers ('uh'). Also, 'the one person' should be 'one person', and 'company' is incorrect; the intended word is 'companionship' or 'relationship'.

× Most of the time, I prefer face to face communication because it allows me to see the other person's facial experience, expressions and body language which help me understand their feeling better.

✓ Most of the time, I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see the other person's facial expressions and body language, which help me understand their feelings better.

'Facial experience' is incorrect; the correct term is 'facial expressions'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context.

× In contrast, social media conversation can be also good, but only for the short masses or something.

✓ In contrast, social media conversation can also be good, but only for short messages or something.

'The short masses' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'short messages'. Also, 'can be also good' should be 'can also be good' for correct adverb placement.

× If I am not agree with my friends then I will do argument and I always try to resolve it as soon as possible so we so our our bond can remain same.

✓ If I do not agree with my friends, then I will argue, and I always try to resolve it as soon as possible so our bond can remain the same.

'I am not agree' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not agree'. 'I will do argument' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'argue'. Also, 'remain same' requires the definite article 'the' before 'same'.

× For example there are some there are some issues on which we both have different opinions but after that we agree on.

✓ For example, there are some issues on which we both have different opinions, but after that, we agree.

The sentence is repetitive ('there are some there are some') and incomplete ('agree on' requires an object). The corrected sentence removes repetition and ends properly.