Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating words (e.g., "I'm I'm") and ensure sentences are complete and grammatically correct. Also, avoid sentence fragments like "Which made me feel happier and morally." Instead, combine ideas into complete sentences and use linking words to improve flow.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps us stay connected. Moreover, through our conversations, I feel supported and cared for, which makes me feel happier and more confident.

Suggestion: Your answer covers a range of topics, which is good, but the sentence structure is awkward and lacks linking words. Try to use linking words like "such as" or "for example" to organize your ideas clearly. Also, pay attention to verb tenses and plural forms to improve grammatical accuracy.

Example: We usually chat about various topics, such as books, movies, our personal experiences, events that happened in high school, and sometimes social issues.

Suggestion: Your answer expresses your preference clearly, but the second sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. Try to combine your ideas into complete sentences and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid sentence fragments and improve word choice for clarity.

Example: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it offers more perspectives. Additionally, I enjoy the atmosphere of deep thinking and open-minded discussions, which really inspire me.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "Good afternoon today" and repeated ideas. Use clear, concise sentences and linking words to explain your preference logically.

Example: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because when talking in person, I can see people's expressions and gestures, which makes me feel more secure.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit wordy and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammatical errors such as "have argument" should be "have an argument."

Example: I seldom argue with my friends because we usually discuss topics just for fun rather than controversial issues, so there's no need to have an argument.

× What's more, through chatting I feel I'm I'm supported and cared by them.

✓ What's more, through chatting I feel I'm supported and cared for by them.

The phrase 'cared by them' is incorrect because the verb 'care' requires the preposition 'for' when used in the passive form. The correct phrase is 'cared for by them.' This is a common prepositional usage error.

× Which made me feel happier and morally.

✓ Which made me feel happier and more moral.

The word 'morally' is an adverb, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe the feeling. 'More moral' is the correct adjective form here. Also, the sentence fragment starting with 'Which' should be connected properly, but since only grammar issues are corrected, the adjective form is fixed.

× Our topics are various, we chat about books, movies and our experience and the things happened in our high school and we also chat about some social issues.

✓ Our topics are various; we chat about books, movies, our experiences, and the things that happened in our high school, and we also chat about some social issues.

The word 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the plural context. Also, 'things happened' needs 'that' to be grammatically correct. Commas and semicolons improve sentence clarity.

× I prefer chatting with a group of people because there are more perspectives. Enjoy the atmosphere of deep thinking and open minded really inspires me.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because there are more perspectives. Enjoying the atmosphere of deep thinking and being open-minded really inspires me.

The second sentence lacks a subject and verb; 'Enjoy' should be 'Enjoying' to function as a gerund subject, and 'open minded' should be hyphenated as 'open-minded' and preceded by 'being' to be grammatically correct.

× Good afternoon today face to face because when you are talking to a people or doing when you are talking to people face to face, you can see their expressions and their gestures.

✓ Good afternoon. Today I prefer face-to-face communication because when you are talking to people face to face, you can see their expressions and their gestures.

The phrase 'a people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural and does not need an article. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and missing subjects; adding 'I prefer' clarifies the meaning. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× It made me feel more secure.

✓ It makes me feel more secure.

The context is about a general preference, so present tense 'makes' is appropriate instead of past tense 'made.' This aligns the verb tense with the ongoing feeling.

× so there's no need to have argument.

✓ so there's no need to have an argument.

The noun 'argument' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'an' before it. Omitting the article is incorrect in this context.