Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhag ma grammar ra sentence structure ma thulo sudhar garnu parcha. "I am really enjoy" ko sato "I really enjoy" bhannu parcha. Aru kura haru pani clear ra natural banau, jastai "especially about daily activities or other things that we share similar thoughts on."

Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends, especially about our daily activities or other topics we both find interesting.

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra clarity ma sudhar garnu parcha. "we usually sharing" ko sato "we usually share" bhannu parcha. Aru kura haru pani clear ra specific banau, jastai online platform ma ke kura garinchha bhanne kura.

Example: If we talk face to face, we usually share our daily life activities. However, on online platforms, we often discuss shared interests like music or movies.

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar natural ra clear cha tara thoda linking words jastai "because" ya "since" prayog garera answer lai arko level ma lyauna sakincha.

Example: I prefer to chat with a single person because I am a shy person and don't want everyone to know about my personal opinions. So, I like sharing things on a deeper level with one close friend.

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. "social media is are providing is very good facilities" bhanda "social media provides good facilities" bhannu ramro huncha. Aru kura haru pani concise ra natural banau.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication. Although social media provides good ways to connect, face-to-face talks are more effective for expressing emotions and messages clearly.

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra clarity ma sudhar garnu parcha. "We never fought or argue nothing" ko sato "We never fight or argue" bhannu parcha. Aru kura haru pani clear ra natural banau.

Example: Actually, I am not the type of person who argues. I usually believe my friends are right, and sometimes I am right too. We never fight or argue because I prefer to listen.

× Yes, I am really enjoy chatting with my close friends, specially about the daily activities or some kind of other things that you happen to share the similar thoughts on.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends, especially about daily activities or other things that we happen to share similar thoughts on.

The phrase 'I am really enjoy' is incorrect because 'enjoy' should be in the base form after 'I' without 'am'. The correct form is 'I really enjoy'. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially' as it means 'particularly'. 'Some kind of other things' is awkward; 'other things' is sufficient. 'You happen to share' should be 'we happen to share' to match the subject. Suggestions: Use simple present tense 'I enjoy' and correct adverbs and pronouns.

× If it's a face to face conversation then we usually sharing our daily lives activities and if it is in some online platforms then it would be about some means that we shared to each other.

✓ If it's a face-to-face conversation, then we usually share our daily life activities, and if it is on some online platforms, then it would be about some things that we share with each other.

The phrase 'we usually sharing' is incorrect; after 'usually' the base verb 'share' should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'Daily lives activities' should be 'daily life activities'. 'In some online platforms' should be 'on some online platforms' because 'on' is the correct preposition for platforms. 'Means that we shared to each other' is awkward; 'things that we share with each other' is better. Suggestions: Use base verb after adverbs like 'usually', correct prepositions, and use appropriate nouns.

× If it is in some online platforms then it would be about some means that we shared to each other.

✓ If it is on some online platforms, then it would be about some things that we share with each other.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to platforms; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, 'shared to each other' should be 'share with each other' to correctly express mutual sharing. Suggestions: Use 'on' for platforms and 'share with' for mutual exchange.

× If it's a face to face conversation then we usually sharing our daily lives activities and if it is in some online platforms then it would be about some means that we shared to each other.

✓ If it's a face-to-face conversation, then we usually share our daily life activities, and if it is on some online platforms, then it would be about some things that we share with each other.

The pronoun 'we' is correct here, but the original sentence had 'you' in a similar context earlier which was incorrect. Here, 'we' correctly refers to the speaker and friends. The correction ensures consistent and appropriate pronoun use. Suggestions: Use 'we' when referring to the speaker and friends collectively.

× Yes, I am really enjoy chatting with my close friends, specially about the daily activities or some kind of other things that you happen to share the similar thoughts on.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends, especially about daily activities or other things that we happen to share similar thoughts on.

'Specially' is an incorrect adverb here; the correct word is 'especially' which means 'particularly'. Also, 'some kind of other things' is awkward; 'other things' is sufficient. Suggestions: Use 'especially' to indicate emphasis and avoid redundant phrases.

× I would prefer one friend with whom I can share everything on a deeper level.

✓ I would prefer one friend with whom I can share everything on a deeper level.

This sentence is correct in terms of singular and plural usage. 'One friend' is singular and correctly matched with 'whom I can share'. No correction needed here.

× I would prefer one friend with whom I can share everything on a deeper level.

✓ I would prefer one friend with whom I can share everything at a deeper level.

'On a deeper level' is commonly used and acceptable, but 'at a deeper level' is more idiomatic when referring to depth of sharing or communication. Suggestions: Use 'at a deeper level' for more natural expression.

× I prefer the face to face communication.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'face-to-face communication' when speaking generally. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. Suggestions: Omit unnecessary articles and use hyphens for compound adjectives.

× I know social media is are providing is very good facilities for communication, but still face to face communication is very effective to convey your message or your emotions to the next person.

✓ I know social media provides very good facilities for communication, but still face-to-face communication is very effective to convey your message or your emotions to the other person.

The phrase 'is are providing is' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'provides'. 'Facilities' is plural and correctly used. 'To the next person' is awkward; 'to the other person' is better. Suggestions: Use correct verb forms and appropriate phrases for clarity.

× I know social media is are providing is very good facilities for communication, but still face to face communication is very effective to convey your message or your emotions to the next person.

✓ I know social media provides very good facilities for communication, but still face-to-face communication is very effective to convey your message or your emotions to the other person.

The phrase 'to the next person' is not idiomatic in this context; 'to the other person' is more appropriate when referring to the person you are communicating with. Suggestions: Use 'to the other person' for clarity.

× So I just prefer face to face communication.

✓ So I just prefer face-to-face communication.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective before a noun. Suggestions: Use hyphens in compound adjectives.

× Actually I'm not that type of person who would argue.

✓ Actually, I'm not the type of person who would argue.

The phrase 'that type of person' is less common; 'the type of person' is more natural. Also, a comma after 'Actually' improves clarity. Suggestions: Use 'the type of person' and proper punctuation.

× I mostly feel whatever my friends say to me is correct and sometimes what I say is correct.

✓ I mostly feel that whatever my friends say to me is correct, and sometimes what I say is correct.

Adding 'that' after 'feel' improves sentence clarity. Also, a comma before 'and' separates the clauses properly. Suggestions: Use conjunctions and punctuation for clarity.

× We never fought or argue nothing and my nature is listening type so that is why also.

✓ We never fought or argued, and my nature is to be a listening type, so that is why.

'Argue nothing' is incorrect; it should be 'argued'. The verb forms should be consistent in past tense: 'never fought or argued'. 'My nature is listening type' is awkward; 'my nature is to be a listening type' is better. Also, the sentence needs commas for clarity. Suggestions: Use consistent verb tenses and proper sentence structure.