Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is good but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition such as 'conversation conversation'. Also, make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, you can say why video chatting is better in a more natural way.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially those who live far away. I prefer video chatting to texting because I can see their facial expressions, which makes our conversations more engaging.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about topics you discuss. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: We usually talk about our past activities in school and college, sharing fun memories. Since it's harder to meet now, we also discuss our future plans to keep each other motivated.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with clear supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Example: It depends on my mood. When I feel bored or stressed, I prefer chatting with a small group of friends on Instagram because it helps me relax.

Suggestion: Good answer but avoid repetition like 'have more have more'. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity and fluency. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me understand others' emotions better and have more meaningful conversations. However, when I'm busy or far away, I use social media to stay in touch.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your opinion and explain it with simple, correct sentences. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions. But these arguments are usually calm discussions that help us understand each other better and improve our communication skills.

× I really love to see their expression, how they are feeling and which make our conversation conversation more likely.

✓ I really love to see their expressions, how they are feeling, which makes our conversation more lively.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which'. Also, 'expression' should be plural 'expressions' to match the context. 'More likely' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'more lively' to describe the conversation.

× Actually we really enjoy talking about our past activities in school level or in college, what we did and how the fun was used to be and now it's uh, getting hard to meet them.

✓ Actually, we really enjoy talking about our past activities at school or in college, what we did, how fun it used to be, and now it's getting hard to meet them.

The phrase 'how the fun was used to be' is incorrect; it should be 'how fun it used to be' to correctly express past habitual state. Also, 'in school level' is better expressed as 'at school'. Commas are added for clarity.

× And we really enjoy talking about also future and make each other fun.

✓ We also really enjoy talking about the future and making each other laugh.

The phrase 'talking about also future' is awkward; 'also' should come before 'really'. 'Make each other fun' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'making each other laugh' or 'having fun together'. The verb form 'make' should be 'making' to follow 'enjoy' which is followed by a gerund.

× Actually, it really depends upon my mood and whenever I feel, uh, bored or I feel so hectic and in at the end of the day, I really enjoy talking with my a few friends that we had a group in Instagram and we call, I call her.

✓ Actually, it really depends on my mood. Whenever I feel bored or hectic, at the end of the day, I really enjoy talking with a few friends. We have a group on Instagram, and I call her.

The phrase 'depends upon' is acceptable but 'depends on' is more common. 'In at the end of the day' is incorrect; it should be 'at the end of the day'. 'My a few friends' is incorrect; it should be 'a few friends'. 'Had a group in Instagram' should be 'have a group on Instagram'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face whenever possible because it allows me to understand the other person emotions are better and have more have more meaningful conversation.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face whenever possible because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions better and have more meaningful conversations.

The phrase 'other person emotions are better' is incorrect; it should be 'other person's emotions better'. Also, 'have more have more meaningful conversation' is repetitive and should be 'have more meaningful conversations' (plural) to match the context.

× However, when I'm busy or far away from my friends and family, I really I used to text through the social media.

✓ However, when I'm busy or far away from my friends and family, I usually text through social media.

'I used to text' implies a past habit, but the context suggests a current habit, so 'usually text' is more appropriate. Also, 'through the social media' should be 'through social media' without 'the'.

× Yes, I used to sometime we if we are if we have a conflict in opinion, I used to fight with them.

✓ Yes, sometimes if we have a conflict in opinion, I used to argue with them.

'Used to' indicates past habits; if the speaker means current or occasional behavior, 'sometimes' is better. Also, 'fight' is too strong; 'argue' fits better for conflicts in opinion.

× No, no, actually I don't do that kind of fight, but the argument in voice argument which it really improve our our skills about, you know, it's really important and all this about the particular subject.

✓ No, actually I don't engage in that kind of fight, but we have verbal arguments which really improve our skills. You know, it's really important and all about the particular subject.

The phrase 'argument in voice argument' is unclear; 'verbal arguments' is correct. 'Improve' should be 'improve' (plural subject). The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.