Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và câu bị rối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected. I often share my daily experiences and hobbies, which strengthens our friendship and allows us to support each other.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và câu bị ngắt quãng. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives and personal experiences. For example, we often discuss our shared interests, such as playing games or watching movies, which helps us stay connected.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tưởng bằng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: It depends, but I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to gain different perspectives and learn from others. This creates a lively atmosphere for sharing ideas.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it allows me to express my emotions and mood clearly. For example, when I talk to my friends in person, I can use facial expressions to convey my feelings.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

Example: Yes, I often argue with my friends, especially when we work on school projects. We have different opinions, so we discuss and consider all ideas to find the best solution. These arguments help us understand each other better.

× I often use setting to share my daily life experience and hobbies which have strengthened our friendship and is allow us to support each other and keep.

✓ I often use chatting to share my daily life experience and hobbies which have strengthened our friendship and allow us to support each other and keep connected.

The word 'setting' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form related to the context is 'chatting'. Also, 'is allow' should be 'allow' to agree with the plural subject 'hobbies'. The sentence needs 'connected' at the end to complete the phrase 'keep connected'.

× I usually check with my friends about our daily life and personal experience.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily life and personal experiences.

The verb 'check' is incorrect in this context; 'chat' is appropriate for conversations. Also, 'personal experience' should be plural 'personal experiences' to match 'daily life'.

× we often talk about the similar interests like playing games or watching movies Is have us stay connected.

✓ We often talk about similar interests like playing games or watching movies which help us stay connected.

The phrase 'the similar interests' should be 'similar interests' without 'the'. 'Is have' is incorrect; it should be 'which help' to agree with plural 'interests'.

× It it depends chatting with a group APPA people help me to have more time to gain experience and gain the different perspective from them and this creator atmosphere to show.

✓ It depends. Chatting with a group of people helps me to have more opportunities to gain experience and gain different perspectives from them, and this creates an atmosphere to share.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases. 'It it depends' should be 'It depends.' 'APPA people' is unclear, corrected to 'a group of people'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'chatting'. 'Gain the different perspective' should be 'gain different perspectives'. 'This creator atmosphere to show' is unclear and corrected to 'this creates an atmosphere to share'.

× I prefer communicating with face to face because it's allowed me to express emotions and mood clearly to others.

✓ I prefer communicating face-to-face because it allows me to express emotions and moods clearly to others.

'It's allowed me' is incorrect; it should be 'it allows me' to express present ability. 'With face to face' should be 'face-to-face' as an adverbial phrase. 'Mood' should be plural 'moods' to match 'emotions'.

× For example, when I when I have talk to my friends I can use facial facial expressions.

✓ For example, when I talk to my friends, I can use facial expressions.

'Have talk' is incorrect; it should be 'talk' in present tense to match 'when I talk'. Repetition of 'when I' and 'facial' is removed for clarity.

× Yes, I think it's really common in to agree with my friends, especially when we work on school project together.

✓ Yes, I think it's really common to disagree with my friends, especially when we work on school projects together.

The phrase 'common in to agree' is incorrect; it should be 'common to disagree' to match the context of arguing. 'School project' should be plural 'school projects' to generalize.

× We often have different real boys so we discard anybody out ideas to find the best solution and this agreement you are usually useful and have us understand each other better.

✓ We often have different viewpoints, so we discuss various ideas to find the best solution, and this agreement is usually useful and helps us understand each other better.

'Real boys' is incorrect; likely intended 'real views' or 'viewpoints'. 'Discard anybody out ideas' is incorrect; corrected to 'discuss various ideas'. 'You are' should be 'is' to agree with 'agreement'. 'Have us' should be 'helps us'.