Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Perbaiki penggunaan kata kerja dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Kurangi pengulangan kata 'uh' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day. We often share interesting stories and fun experiences, which makes our conversations enjoyable.

Suggestion: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan perbaiki tata bahasa. Jelaskan dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Example: We usually talk about our daily work challenges and discuss effective ways to solve problems. Besides that, we also share some fun stories to lighten the mood.

Suggestion: Perbaiki pemilihan kata dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Hindari pengulangan 'uh' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan padat.

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to share things privately and speak more freely.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan hilangkan pengulangan kata. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan efektif untuk menyampaikan alasan preferensi.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see their reactions and express myself more freely during the conversation.

Suggestion: Perbaiki penggunaan kosakata dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan jelas.

Example: Sometimes, when we discuss interesting topics, we share our thoughts and insights, which can lead to arguments. However, we always reach a conclusion afterwards.

× Every day I, uh, used to chat with my friends and we share, uh, stories each other and then, uh, we share, uh, anything, uh, that will be fun and yeah, uh, it is, uh, interesting.

✓ Every day I, uh, used to chat with my friends and we shared, uh, stories with each other and then, uh, we shared, uh, anything, uh, that would be fun and yeah, uh, it was, uh, interesting.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Used to' indicates past habitual action, so verbs following should be in past tense ('shared' instead of 'share'). Also, 'will be' should be 'would be' to maintain past tense consistency. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× we share, uh, stories each other

✓ we share, uh, stories with each other

The phrase 'share stories each other' is missing the preposition 'with' which is necessary to indicate the relationship between the subject and object. Correct usage is 'share stories with each other'.

× We usually share about jobs and how difficult a job in each day and how the job can solve effectively

✓ We usually share about jobs and how difficult a job is each day and how the job can be done effectively

The phrase 'how difficult a job in each day' lacks the verb 'is' to complete the sentence. Also, 'how the job can solve effectively' is incorrect; it should be 'how the job can be done effectively' to correctly express the idea.

× I prefer, uh, chat, uh, with, uh, only, uh, one friend, uh, because, uh, it is in the mail, uh, to share about, uh, anything, uh, privately

✓ I prefer, uh, to chat, uh, with, uh, only, uh, one friend, uh, because, uh, it is more personal, uh, to share about, uh, anything, uh, privately

The phrase 'it is in the mail' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended to be 'it is more personal'. Also, 'prefer chat' should be 'prefer to chat' to correctly use the verb after 'prefer'.

× I called, uh, tell free

✓ I feel, uh, free to tell

The phrase 'I called tell free' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I feel free to tell', meaning the speaker is comfortable sharing information.

× I prefer to speaking face to face because I could look, uh, uh, their reaction, uh, while uh, speaking with me.

✓ I prefer to speak face to face because I can look, uh, uh, at their reaction, uh, while uh, speaking with me.

After 'prefer to', the base form of the verb should be used ('speak' not 'speaking'). Also, 'could' implies past ability; 'can' is appropriate for present ability. The preposition 'at' is needed after 'look'.

× I prefer to speaking face to face because I could look, uh, uh, their reaction

✓ I prefer to speak face to face because I can look, uh, uh, at their reaction

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to observing something. Also, 'speaking' should be 'speak' after 'prefer to'.

× Sometimes if we talk about intersect topics, we share, uh, our thinkings or our insights about, uh, those topics and we usually argue, uh, each other.

✓ Sometimes if we talk about interesting topics, we share, uh, our thoughts or our insights about, uh, those topics and we usually argue with each other.

'Intersect topics' is likely a mispronunciation of 'interesting topics'. 'Thinkings' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'thoughts'. The verb 'argue' requires the preposition 'with' when indicating the person involved.

× And after that, uh, we conclude.

✓ And after that, uh, we come to a conclusion.

The verb 'conclude' is transitive and usually requires an object. Saying 'we conclude' is incomplete; 'we come to a conclusion' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.