Chatting— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Obviously I love chatting with friends as I do a nine to five job. I really don't get enough time to catch up with them. But uh, whenever I get the time to chat with them, I text them and they reply. And yes, I love talking to them because, uh, we live in a society and we need help from each other.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
We usually, uh, chat about our lifestyle and our big life decisions. Mostly we talk about our relationships and family issues that, uh, how we should, uh, proceed on effect, such as my friends is, uh, was discussing me about her marriage.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
I actually prefer to talk with one to talk 101 because it gives us the space to talk freely without any judgment. In a group of environment, we don't know who is thinking what and how we should communicate with each other, but in a.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
I mostly prefer to communicate via social media because we actually don't get enough time to meet or to go out. So I prefer communicating with social media and we actually talk through video call and talk about our lifestyle and which helps to reduce our stress.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
No, I never argue with my friends. If we are having any misunderstanding or they are arise some conflicts between us, we talk about those topic maturely. We don't let anything to ruin our relationship and bonding among us because friendship is very important to us.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and avoid redundancy. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.
Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because my nine-to-five job limits my free time. Therefore, whenever I have a chance, I text them to catch up. I value these conversations since social support is important in our lives.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Provide specific examples clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically.
Example: We usually chat about our lifestyles and important life decisions. For example, recently a friend discussed her upcoming marriage and sought my advice on how to proceed.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Complete your sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use clear language and explain your preference with supporting reasons and linking words.
Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows for open and honest conversations without judgment. In contrast, group chats can be confusing since it's hard to know everyone's thoughts clearly.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and use more varied vocabulary. Also, organize your answer with linking words to improve flow and clarity.
Example: I mostly prefer communicating via social media because we often lack time to meet in person. For instance, we use video calls to discuss our lifestyles, which helps reduce stress effectively.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 78.0Suggestion: Work on grammar accuracy and avoid awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clear explanations.
Example: No, I never argue with my friends. Whenever misunderstandings or conflicts arise, we discuss them maturely to maintain our strong friendship because it is very important to us.
Grammar
× Mostly we talk about our relationships and family issues that, uh, how we should, uh, proceed on effect, such as my friends is, uh, was discussing me about her marriage.
✓ Mostly we talk about our relationships and family issues, such as my friend was discussing with me about her marriage.
The phrase 'my friends is' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular. It should be 'my friend was' to match singular subject and past tense. Also, 'discussing me about' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'discussing with me about'. Additionally, 'proceed on effect' is unclear and likely incorrect, so it was omitted for clarity.
× If we are having any misunderstanding or they are arise some conflicts between us, we talk about those topic maturely.
✓ If we have any misunderstandings or if there arise some conflicts between us, we talk about those topics maturely.
The word 'misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings' to match the context. The phrase 'they are arise' is incorrect; it should be 'there arise' to indicate the occurrence of conflicts. Also, 'those topic' should be plural 'those topics' to agree in number with 'those'.
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