Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'attach the information about states update' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share experiences and exchange new ideas. We also talk about the latest trends on social media, which keeps our conversations interesting.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'there are variety of topics' nên là 'there are a variety of topics'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi lặp lại và chưa rõ ràng, bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: We usually chat about various topics, especially social media platforms like Shopee and TikTok. These help us discover new clothes and keep up with the latest trends.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'personal brackets' và 'clamorous or noisy'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

Example: It depends on the situation. If I want to share personal secrets, I prefer talking to one friend. But if I want a lively conversation, I enjoy chatting with a group.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng nên dùng từ chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'decide to communicate directly' nên là 'prefer face-to-face communication'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express emotions like happiness or sadness more clearly, and we can use body language.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'I have many conflicts' nên là 'I had many conflicts'. Bạn nên dùng thì quá khứ cho sự kiện đã xảy ra và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Yes, I used to argue with my friends at university, especially when we had different opinions during essay discussions. However, we always resolved our conflicts and stayed good friends.

× Well, of course I'm into talking with my friends so much because they can share the experience or give me new ideas and we can attach the information about states update on the last trends on social media.

✓ Well, of course I'm into talking with my friends so much because they can share experiences or give me new ideas and we can attach information about state updates on the latest trends on social media.

The word 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' because it refers to multiple instances. 'States update' should be 'state updates' to correctly use plural noun form. 'The last trends' should be 'the latest trends' to use the correct adjective for recent events.

× Well, there are variety of topics that we mention, but we usually talk about the social media like Shopee or Tiktok because we can buy new clothes or shop in there and besides we can stay up in stay up latest trend.

✓ Well, there is a variety of topics that we mention, but we usually talk about social media like Shopee or TikTok because we can buy new clothes or shop there and besides we can stay up to date with the latest trends.

'There are variety' should be 'there is a variety' because 'variety' is singular. 'The social media' should be 'social media' without 'the'. 'Shop in there' should be 'shop there'. 'Stay up in stay up latest trend' is incorrect; it should be 'stay up to date with the latest trends'.

× Well, it depends on some situations like when I want to share personal brackets or secrets I will exchange with only one person and besides under contrast if I want to clamorous or noisy I will chat with group of people to connect with others.

✓ Well, it depends on some situations like when I want to share personal matters or secrets I will exchange with only one person and besides, in contrast, if I want to be clamorous or noisy I will chat with a group of people to connect with others.

'Personal brackets' is incorrect; it should be 'personal matters'. 'Besides under contrast' should be 'besides, in contrast'. 'Chat with group of people' should be 'chat with a group of people'. 'Want to clamorous or noisy' should be 'want to be clamorous or noisy'.

× Well, I decide to communicate directly because it can express more emotions like happy or sadness and we can use body language.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate directly because it can express more emotions like happiness or sadness and we can use body language.

'I decide' is better as 'I prefer' to express habitual preference. 'Like happy or sadness' should be 'like happiness or sadness' to use correct noun forms.

× Definitely yes. When I studied at universities, I have many conflicts with other friends I took. I took part in the essays and we have many opposed ideas. However, we always manage to restore them and remain good friends in the end.

✓ Definitely yes. When I studied at university, I had many conflicts with other friends I took. I took part in essays and we had many opposing ideas. However, we always managed to resolve them and remained good friends in the end.

'I have many conflicts' should be past tense 'I had many conflicts' to match 'When I studied'. 'Universities' should be singular 'university' if referring to one. 'Opposed ideas' should be 'opposing ideas'. 'Manage to restore them' should be 'managed to resolve them'. 'Remain' should be past tense 'remained'.