Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时有些语法错误和表达不够自然，例如“During working day I uh, normally send message to my friend to chat online”应改为“During the working day, I usually send messages to my friends to chat online”。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，同时避免口头语“uh”，使表达更流畅自然。

Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. During the working day, I usually send messages to them online as a way to relax and reduce stress. On weekends, I prefer to meet them in person so we can have face-to-face conversations.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“when interested things happened”应为“when interesting things happen”，且最后一句不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子，避免重复表达。

Example: I usually chat about various topics with my friends. For example, when something interesting happens, I share it immediately to spread happiness and cheer them up. Also, when something sad occurs, I talk to my friends for support.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，如“I'm a introverted people”应为“I'm an introverted person”，且表达不够连贯。建议注意冠词和单复数的正确使用，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a friend because I am an introverted person. Talking in front of a group makes me feel stressed and nervous, which does not help me relieve pressure.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，如“both way works”应为“both ways work”，且“we we are available”重复。建议注意主谓一致和拼写，句子结构应更简洁清晰。

Example: I think both ways work for me, depending on the situation. For example, during working hours, I can only chat with my friends online via social media. After work, we sometimes go out together if we are both available.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，如“put myself in others shoes”应为“put myself in others' shoes”，“others feeling”应为“others' feelings”。建议加强对所有格和复数形式的掌握，并使表达更自然。

Example: I rarely argue with my friends because I try to put myself in others' shoes to understand their feelings. Therefore, I prefer understanding others rather than arguing to prove that I am right.

× During working day I uh, normally send message to my friend to chat online.

✓ During working days, I usually send messages to my friends to chat online.

这里“working day”应为复数形式“working days”，因为指的是多个工作日；“message”应为复数“messages”，表示多条信息；“friend”应为复数“friends”，表示多个朋友。

× And during weekend I prefer meet them in person so we can talk face to face.

✓ And during the weekend, I prefer to meet them in person so we can talk face to face.

“prefer”后面应接不定式“to meet”，而不是直接动词原形“meet”；“during weekend”应加定冠词“the”，变为“during the weekend”。

× There are various topics I can share with my friend.

✓ There are various topics I can share with my friends.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为前面提到有多个话题，通常是和多个朋友分享。

× when interested things happened, I usually share with my friends immediately so that I can share the happiness and the good feeling to also cheer my friends up.

✓ When interesting things happen, I usually share with my friends immediately so that I can share the happiness and the good feelings to also cheer my friends up.

“interested things”应为“interesting things”，形容词用法错误；“happened”时态不对，应为一般现在时“happen”，因为是习惯动作；“feeling”应为复数“feelings”，表示多种感觉。

× But when something sad or bad things happen, I will also talk to friends so.

✓ But when something sad or bad happens, I will also talk to friends.

“things”与“something”重复，应去掉“things”；“happen”应与“something”单数主语一致，改为“happens”；句尾“so”多余，应删除。

× I prefer to chat one-on-one to my friend because I'm a introverted people so chat in front of a bunch of people will make me feel stressed and nervous.

✓ I prefer to chat one-on-one with my friend because I'm an introverted person, so chatting in front of a bunch of people makes me feel stressed and nervous.

“to my friend”应为“with my friend”；“a introverted people”错误，people是复数，前面用单数不定冠词，应改为“an introverted person”；“chat”应改为动名词“chatting”；“will make”改为一般现在时“makes”，与主语“chatting”一致。

× I prefer to chat one-on-one to my friend because I'm a introverted people so chat in front of a bunch of people will make me feel stressed and nervous.

✓ I prefer to chat one-on-one with my friend because I'm an introverted person, so chatting in front of a bunch of people makes me feel stressed and nervous.

“chat one-on-one to my friend”中介词“to”用错，应为“with”。

× I think both way works for me and it depends on the situation.

✓ I think both ways work for me and it depends on the situation.

“both way”应为复数“both ways”；“works”应与复数主语“ways”一致，改为“work”。

× For example during the working time I can only chat with my friends online using social media but after work we can sometimes go out together but it depends we we are available or not.

✓ For example, during working hours, I can only chat with my friends online using social media, but after work we can sometimes go out together, but it depends on whether we are available or not.

“working time”应改为复数“working hours”；“depends we we are”语法错误，应为“depends on whether we are”。

× but it depends we we are available or not.

✓ but it depends on whether we are available or not.

“depends”后应接介词“on”，构成固定搭配“depends on”。

× I rarely argue with friends because I like to try to put myself in others shoes so I can understand what others feeling.

✓ I rarely argue with friends because I like to try to put myself in others' shoes so I can understand what others are feeling.

“others shoes”应为所有格“others' shoes”；“others feeling”应为“others are feeling”，补充动词使句子完整。

× I rarely argue with friends because I like to try to put myself in others shoes so I can understand what others feeling.

✓ I rarely argue with friends because I like to try to put myself in others' shoes so I can understand what others are feeling.

“others”作为所有格时应加撇号，变为“others'”；“others feeling”缺少动词，应为“others are feeling”。

× So I prefer to understand other rather than argue with them to make sure I'm the only ones correct.

✓ So I prefer to understand others rather than argue with them to make sure I'm the only one correct.

“other”应为复数“others”；“only ones”应为单数“only one”，因为主语是“I”。