Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“interesting, interesting things”，并注意时态一致性。建议简洁明了地表达观点，同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends both when we hang out and in the classroom because we always have many interesting topics to share. It helps me relax and feel connected.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如“feeling and how I feel”，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并用连接词组织内容。

Example: I usually share my daily experiences and feelings with my friends. For example, we talk about our family, school performance, and various tasks, which helps us understand each other's lives better.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“couldn't be concentrated on one thing”应为“cannot concentrate on one thing”。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: I prefer chatting with only one friend because when there are too many people, it's hard to focus on one topic and have a clear conversation.

Suggestion: 表达中存在不自然的短语，如“get close to the heart or the feeling”，建议使用更地道的表达，并注意句子结构的完整性。

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps build a closer connection and allows me to understand my friend's feelings better, which is hard to achieve through social media.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“on the on the answer”，建议简化表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: Yes, I often argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions about academic tasks or exam questions. We discuss various answers and solutions to solve problems.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friends whenever we were hanging out or in classroom, you know, we just have so many topics and a lot of interesting, interesting things to share when we were in school.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends whenever we are hanging out or in the classroom, you know, we just have so many topics and a lot of interesting things to share when we are in school.

这里的时间是现在时态，描述的是习惯性动作，所以不应该用过去时were，而应该用现在时are。

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friends whenever we were hanging out or in classroom, you know, we just have so many topics and a lot of interesting, interesting things to share when we were in school.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends whenever we are hanging out or in the classroom, you know, we just have so many topics and a lot of interesting things to share when we are in school.

“in classroom”缺少冠词，正确用法是“in the classroom”。

× we just have so many topics and a lot of interesting, interesting things to share when we were in school.

✓ we just have so many topics and a lot of interesting things to share when we are in school.

“interesting”重复出现，应去掉重复词。

× Actually, every day I will share my experiences and feeling and how I feel with my friends.

✓ Actually, every day I will share my experiences and feelings and how I feel with my friends.

“feeling”应为复数形式“feelings”，因为这里指多种感受。

× We will say or tell a lot of things such as family members or academic performance and tasks and so on, to talk and to share our life.

✓ We will say or tell a lot of things such as family members, academic performance, tasks and so on, to talk and to share our lives.

“share our life”应为复数“share our lives”，因为每个人的生活是多样的。

× Well, I I think I prefer to chat with only one friend.

✓ Well, I think I prefer to chat with only one friend.

句中“I I”重复，应去掉一个。

× You know, if too many people involved in the talking period, we couldn't be concentrated on one thing or just the say precisely or a complete thing.

✓ You know, if too many people are involved in the talking period, we couldn't concentrate on one thing or just say precisely or a complete thing.

“too many people involved”缺少动词“are”，且“couldn't be concentrated”应改为主动语态“couldn't concentrate”。

× You know, if too many people involved in the talking period, we couldn't be concentrated on one thing or just the say precisely or a complete thing.

✓ You know, if too many people are involved in the talking period, we couldn't concentrate on one thing or just say precisely or a complete thing.

“just the say”中“the”多余，应去掉。

× Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because you could shorten the distance between you and your friend and you can get close to the heart or the feeling to your friend.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because you can shorten the distance between you and your friend and you can get close to the heart or the feelings of your friend.

“get close to the heart or the feeling to your friend”中，“feeling to”应改为“feelings of”，表示“朋友的感受”。

× It won't make you to feel just so weird or strange.

✓ It won't make you feel so weird or strange.

“make you to feel”中“to”不应出现，正确结构是“make someone do something”。

× MMM, I often argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on the academic tasks or the exams, when we hold the divergent viewpoint on the on the answer or on the solution to solve this problem.

✓ MMM, I often argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on academic tasks or exams, when we hold divergent viewpoints on the answer or on the solution to solve a problem.

“the academic tasks or the exams”中冠词“the”多余，应去掉；“divergent viewpoint”应为复数“viewpoints”；“the on the answer”中“the”重复，应去掉；“to solve this problem”中“this”改为不特指的“a”更合适。