Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and using proper verb forms. Also, be more specific about the topics you discuss to enrich your answer.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. We often talk about various topics such as movies, school, and our hobbies.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to sound more fluent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific details to make your answer richer.

Example: We usually chat about girly things such as makeup, outfits, and restaurant recommendations. Additionally, we share our travel experiences and sometimes discuss family issues.

Suggestion: Try to avoid repeating filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to clarify your preference and explain why you like both options.

Example: Actually, I enjoy chatting both with a group of friends and with just one friend. Group chats are lively, but one-on-one conversations feel more personal.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to contrast the two situations clearly and provide specific examples.

Example: It depends on the situation. For serious matters like family problems, I prefer face-to-face communication. However, for simple questions or advice, I usually use social media.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and improve grammar. Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structure to explain how arguments affect your friendship.

Example: Yes, we sometimes argue, but these arguments have helped us build a stronger bond. They allow us to understand each other better.

× Uh, it's a very big part of my day chatting with my friends and talk about very top different topics.

✓ Uh, it's a very big part of my day chatting with my friends and talking about very different top topics.

The verb 'talk' should be in the '-ing' form 'talking' to parallel 'chatting' in the sentence structure. This maintains grammatical consistency when listing activities.

× talk about very top different topics.

✓ talk about very different top topics.

The correct order of adjectives in English places 'different' before 'top'. The phrase should be 'different top topics' to follow adjective order rules.

× We usually chat about the girly things like umm, makeup and outfits, uh, restaurants recommendations.

✓ We usually chat about girly things like umm, makeup and outfits, uh, restaurant recommendations.

'Restaurants recommendations' should be 'restaurant recommendations' because 'restaurant' acts as an adjective describing 'recommendations' and should be singular.

× I love uh, chatting with my whole friends, even if it's uh, in Group or separated from each other.

✓ I love uh, chatting with all my friends, even if it's uh, in a group or separated from each other.

The phrase 'my whole friends' is incorrect; 'all my friends' is the correct expression. Also, 'in Group' should be 'in a group' with the indefinite article 'a'.

× Actually depends on the situation.

✓ It actually depends on the situation.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' clarifies the subject and corrects the sentence structure.

× If it's something uh, very basic or if I'm asking for an advice, I would reconnect with them on the chat.

✓ If it's something uh, very basic or if I'm asking for advice, I would reconnect with them on the chat.

The word 'advice' is uncountable and should not be preceded by 'an'. Removing 'an' corrects the usage.

× Yes, that's happened a lot and this arguments, uh, which has reached us to build a really strong bond with each other.

✓ Yes, that's happened a lot and these arguments, uh, have helped us build a really strong bond with each other.

'This arguments' is incorrect; it should be 'these arguments' to agree in number. Also, 'has' should be 'have' to agree with the plural subject 'arguments'. The phrase 'which has reached us to build' is awkward; 'have helped us build' is clearer and grammatically correct.