Part 1
Examiner
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidate
Of course, after a long and, uh, exhausting working day, chatting with friend is the most relaxing thing to do.
Examiner
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidate
We always talk about The funny thing on the work or some complain a colleague and even talk about the memories in university.
Examiner
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidate
Personally I prefer chatting with a group of people because sometime I just want to listen to lost story and I don't have too many opinions. But if I share with only one friend, this is embarrassing if I don't say anything.
Examiner
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidate
I prefer to a face to face communication because I can see the expression or their mood on their face and it's more warming when we can really touch the real person.
Examiner
Do you argue with friends?
Candidate
I'd have never argue with friends. Also we has different thinking about 1 events. I accept the different opinions from the other persons.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误和用词不准确的问题,例如“chatting with friend”应为“chatting with friends”。建议注意复数形式和避免口语填充词“uh”,使表达更自然流畅。
Example: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a long and exhausting day at work.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“The funny thing on the work”应为“funny things at work”,且句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构,避免语法错误。
Example: We usually talk about funny things that happened at work, sometimes complain about colleagues, and also share memories from university.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确,如“sometime”应为“sometimes”,“lost story”不明确。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构,并适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: Personally, I prefer chatting with a group of people because sometimes I just want to listen to their stories without giving many opinions. However, when chatting with only one friend, I feel embarrassed if I don't say anything.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误,如“prefer to a face to face communication”应为“prefer face-to-face communication”。建议注意介词使用和句子简洁性,使表达更自然。
Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see their facial expressions and moods, and it feels warmer when we can physically interact.
Do you argue with friends?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,如“I'd have never argue”应为“I would never argue”,“we has”应为“we have”,且表达不够自然。建议加强语法基础,使用更准确的句子表达观点。
Example: I would never argue with my friends. Even if we have different opinions about an event, I respect their views.
× Of course, after a long and, uh, exhausting working day, chatting with friend is the most relaxing thing to do.
✓ Of course, after a long and, uh, exhausting working day, chatting with friends is the most relaxing thing to do.
friend 应该用复数形式 friends,因为这里指的是和多个朋友聊天。
× We always talk about The funny thing on the work or some complain a colleague and even talk about the memories in university.
✓ We always talk about the funny things at work or some complaints about a colleague and even talk about memories at university.
the funny thing 应该是复数形式 the funny things;on the work 应该用介词 at work;some complain 应该是名词复数 complaints;a colleague 前面需要介词 about;the memories in university 中的 the 不需要,且介词用 at。
× We always talk about The funny thing on the work or some complain a colleague and even talk about the memories in university.
✓ We always talk about the funny things at work or some complaints about a colleague and even talk about memories at university.
funny thing 和 complain 应该用复数形式 things 和 complaints,因为谈论的是多件事或多次抱怨。
× We always talk about The funny thing on the work or some complain a colleague and even talk about the memories in university.
✓ We always talk about the funny things at work or some complaints about a colleague and even talk about memories at university.
介词 on the work 应该改为 at work,in university 应该改为 at university,表示在某个场所。
× Personally I prefer chatting with a group of people because sometime I just want to listen to lost story and I don't have too many opinions.
✓ Personally I prefer chatting with a group of people because sometimes I just want to listen to lost stories and I don't have too many opinions.
sometime 应该用复数形式 sometimes;lost story 应该用复数 stories,因为指多个故事。
× Personally I prefer chatting with a group of people because sometime I just want to listen to lost story and I don't have too many opinions.
✓ Personally I prefer chatting with a group of people because sometimes I just want to listen to lost stories and I don't have too many opinions.
这里不需要定冠词 the,因为是泛指故事。
× But if I share with only one friend, this is embarrassing if I don't say anything.
✓ But if I share with only one friend, it is embarrassing if I don't say anything.
this 指代不明确,应该用 it 来指代前面的情况。
× I prefer to a face to face communication because I can see the expression or their mood on their face and it's more warming when we can really touch the real person.
✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the expression or their mood on their face and it's warmer when we can really touch the real person.
prefer 后面不需要不定冠词 a;warming 应该用比较级 warmer,表示更温暖。
× I prefer to a face to face communication because I can see the expression or their mood on their face and it's more warming when we can really touch the real person.
✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the expression or their mood on their face and it's warmer when we can really touch the real person.
face to face 应该用连字符连接为 face-to-face,表示面对面。
× I'd have never argue with friends.
✓ I'd never argue with friends.
I'd have never argue 结构错误,应该是 I'd never argue,表示“我从不争吵”。
× Also we has different thinking about 1 events.
✓ Also we have different thoughts about events.
we 是复数,动词应该用 have;thinking 应该用复数 thoughts;1 events 数字和复数不匹配,去掉数字。
× I accept the different opinions from the other persons.
✓ I accept different opinions from other people.
the other persons 用法不自然,改为 other people 更合适;opinions 前不需要定冠词 the。