Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and unclear phrases. Use clear linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons. For example, explain why chatting feels easier than face-to-face communication with a clear example.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it feels easier to share my thoughts and problems online. For instance, sometimes I feel shy speaking face-to-face, but chatting allows me to express myself more comfortably.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to answer directly with a topic sentence and provide specific details about current topics you chat about. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences to improve fluency and coherence.

Example: I usually chat with my friends about my studies, work, and daily activities. For example, we often discuss our assignments and share updates about our jobs.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific examples to support your preference for both group and one-on-one chats.

Example: I prefer both chatting with a group and with one friend. For example, group chats help me learn new things, while one-on-one chats allow me to share personal problems more comfortably.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has some grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons. Provide specific examples to illustrate why face-to-face communication is better.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express my feelings and emotions more clearly. For example, when talking to my teachers, I can better understand their instructions and ask questions directly.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to answer directly with a topic sentence and provide specific reasons or examples for arguing with friends. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences to improve clarity and coherence.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions about where to visit or how to prepare for exams. For instance, we once disagreed about which historical site to explore during a school trip.

× sometimes people feel hesitation in front of friends like face to face conversation

✓ sometimes people feel hesitation in front of friends during face-to-face conversations

The preposition 'in front of' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate the context of 'face-to-face conversation' is 'during'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× because it's a good

✓ because it's good

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'good'. 'Good' is an adjective and does not require an article in this context.

× I usually chat uh, about my work, my homework and our gameplay uh, whenever I came in Canada

✓ I usually chatted about my work, my homework and our gameplay whenever I came to Canada

The verb 'chat' should be in the past tense 'chatted' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I came to Canada'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'to' when referring to arriving in a country.

× There are a lot of problems and problems and solution we can discuss with our friend friend not only in Group of the people

✓ There are a lot of problems and solutions we can discuss with our friends, not only in groups of people

The sentence has repetition and incorrect singular/plural forms. 'Problems and problems and solution' is repetitive and should be 'problems and solutions'. 'Friend friend' is a repetition and should be 'friends'. 'Group of the people' should be pluralized as 'groups of people'.

× I prefer face to face communication to with our friends and our relatives as well as our educator

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication with our friends, our relatives, as well as our educators

The preposition 'to with' is incorrect; it should be just 'with'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. 'Educator' should be plural 'educators' to match the plural subjects 'friends' and 'relatives'.

× I mostly argue with my friends, uh, because of like to visit anywhere, any historical place and, and traditional place

✓ I mostly argued with my friends because we liked to visit historical and traditional places

The verb 'argue' should be in past tense 'argued' to match the past time frame. The phrase 'because of like to visit' is incorrect; it should be 'because we liked to visit'. Also, 'anywhere, any historical place and, and traditional place' is awkward and should be simplified to 'historical and traditional places'.

× So we have a lot of argue argues between the like the study exam questions

✓ So we had a lot of arguments about study exam questions

The noun 'argue' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'arguments'. Also, 'argues' is incorrect here. The verb tense should be past 'had' to match the past context. The phrase 'between the like the' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'about'.