Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Also, use more natural phrasing such as 'I enjoy chatting with my friends every day because staying connected is important to me.'

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day because staying connected is important to me.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to connect ideas, for example: 'I usually chat about the important events that happened during my day, and I also ask about their feelings and health.'

Example: I usually chat about the important events that happened during my day, and I also ask about their feelings and health.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more fluent. Avoid filler words and complete your sentences. For example: 'It depends on the situation and topic, but I usually prefer chatting with one friend in private because it feels more secure and reliable.'

Example: It depends on the situation and topic, but I usually prefer chatting with one friend in private because it feels more secure and reliable.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid confusion. Use linking words and correct grammar. For example: 'To be honest, I prefer communicating via social media because it is more comfortable and I can chat easily without worrying about reactions or face-to-face interactions.'

Example: To be honest, I prefer communicating via social media because it is more comfortable and I can chat easily without worrying about reactions or face-to-face interactions.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and filler words. Complete your thoughts and give a clear example. For instance: 'Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes because disagreements are normal. For example, we might argue about different opinions on important topics.'

Example: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes because disagreements are normal. For example, we might argue about different opinions on important topics.

× I like chatting with my friends, uh, each day because, uh, it is more essential to me to be connected with the friends.

✓ I like chatting with my friends each day because it is more essential to me to be connected with friends.

The definite article 'the' before 'friends' is unnecessary here because we are talking about friends in general, not specific ones. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× So usually I chat with them, uh, about, uh, the extreme, uh, events that have been in my in during my day.

✓ So usually I chat with them about the extreme events that have happened during my day.

The phrase 'have been in my in during my day' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'during' to indicate the time frame, and 'have happened' is the proper verb form to describe events that occurred.

× I also, uh, talk about, ask them about their, umm, feelings and healthy.

✓ I also talk about and ask them about their feelings and health.

The word 'healthy' is an adjective and does not fit here; the noun 'health' should be used. Also, the sentence structure is improved by connecting 'talk about' and 'ask about' properly.

× Uh, it is depend on the situation and the topics, uh, what are so.

✓ It depends on the situation and the topics.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the phrase 'what are so' is unclear and unnecessary.

× However, I usually prefer to chat with UH-1 friend only, uh, a private uh, uh, conversation because it is more uh, secure and reliable to ask them about their.

✓ However, I usually prefer to chat with one friend only, a private conversation because it is more secure and reliable to ask them about their feelings.

The phrase 'UH-1 friend' is unclear and should be 'one friend'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'feelings' clarifies what is being asked about. 'Conversation' does not need 'uh' fillers.

× To be honest, I prefer to communicate with people, uh, files, uh, social media because it is more comfortable and I can chat easily to them and without have any reaction or face to face, uh, or watching them face to face.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to communicate with people via social media because it is more comfortable and I can chat with them easily without any reaction or having to face them face to face.

The word 'files' is incorrect and should be 'via' to indicate the medium of communication. Also, 'chat easily to them' should be 'chat with them easily'. The phrase 'without have any reaction' is incorrect; it should be 'without any reaction'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes I do. It is uh, arguing is something normal in any uh, daily life conversation.

✓ Yes, I do. Arguing is something normal in any daily life conversation.

The phrase 'It is uh, arguing is' is redundant and incorrect. The sentence should start directly with 'Arguing is'. Also, 'daily life conversation' is acceptable but could be improved to 'daily conversations' for naturalness.