Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases such as 'so good opportunity' and 'and so on'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because online chatting provides a convenient way to stay connected with family and friends, especially when we are far apart.

Suggestion: Your answer is too general and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question with specific topics you discuss, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, school, and hobbies because these topics help us stay updated and strengthen our friendship.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and lacks fluency. Avoid sentence fragments and use linking words to explain your preference clearly with specific reasons.

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because it allows me to share my opinions and suggestions more openly and have a deeper conversation.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal; however, when that's not possible, social media is a useful alternative to stay in touch.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Provide a direct response and explain briefly with linking words to improve clarity.

Example: Sometimes I do argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions, but we usually resolve our disagreements quickly.

× In my opinion, online chat is so good opportunity to connect uh, many people, for example, your friends, your family and so on.

✓ In my opinion, online chat is a good opportunity to connect with many people, for example, your friends, your family and so on.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'good opportunity' which is necessary because 'opportunity' is a singular countable noun. Also, the preposition 'with' is needed after 'connect' to correctly link the verb to the object 'many people'.

× In my opinion, online chat is so good opportunity to connect uh, many people, for example, your friends, your family and so on.

✓ In my opinion, online chat is a good opportunity to connect with many people, for example, your friends, your family and so on.

The verb 'connect' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate the people you are connecting to. Omitting 'with' is incorrect in this context.

× I often use chats with friends.

✓ I often chat with friends.

The word 'chats' is unnecessary here; 'chat' as a verb is sufficient. Using 'use chats' is awkward and incorrect in this context.

× And I think that it is so good way to connect with others.

✓ And I think that it is a very good way to connect with others.

The phrase 'so good way' is incorrect; it should be 'a very good way' to properly quantify and modify 'way'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very good way'.

× I always prefer to have chat with one friend because.

✓ I always prefer to have a chat with one friend because.

The noun 'chat' is countable here and requires the article 'a' before it. Omitting 'a' is incorrect.

× This time you have a opportunity to share your opinions, your suggestions and so on.

✓ This time you have an opportunity to share your opinions, your suggestions and so on.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'opportunity'.

× If I had a chance. I would choose face to face but sometimes is moment when you have not this opportunity to have relation with face to face with others.

✓ If I had a chance, I would choose face to face, but sometimes there are moments when you do not have the opportunity to have face-to-face interaction with others.

Several issues: 'If I had a chance.' is a sentence fragment and should be connected with the next sentence using a comma. 'Sometimes is moment' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes there are moments'. 'Have not this opportunity' should be 'do not have the opportunity'. 'Have relation with face to face with others' is awkward; 'have face-to-face interaction with others' is correct. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective or noun.

× So I think This is why your social media.

✓ So I think this is why you use social media.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Your social media' is incorrect; it should be 'you use social media' to make sense. Also, 'This' should not be capitalized in the middle of the sentence.

× It's so argued issues, but sometimes yes, I argue with friends.

✓ There are many arguments, but sometimes yes, I argue with friends.

'It's so argued issues' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'There are many arguments' or 'There are many issues that cause arguments'. The original phrase is ungrammatical and unclear.