Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using simpler sentence structures and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "I enjoy chatting with my friends about their current situations and the experiences we've had this year to keep each other updated."

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends about their current situations and the experiences we've had this year to keep each other updated.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating phrases and try to use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "We usually talk about things happening in our lives and share updates so that we can understand each other better and strengthen our bonds."

Example: We usually talk about things happening in our lives and share updates so that we can understand each other better and strengthen our bonds.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use linking words and avoid unclear phrases. For example, "I prefer chatting with a small group of two or three friends because we can discuss different topics and strengthen our bonds."

Example: I prefer chatting with a small group of two or three friends because we can discuss different topics and strengthen our bonds.

Suggestion: Try to make your sentences smoother and avoid hesitation. For example, "I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friends' facial expressions and gestures, which helps prevent misunderstandings."

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friends' facial expressions and gestures, which helps prevent misunderstandings.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas clearly and use complete sentences. For example, "Sometimes I argue with my friends because I care about our relationship. However, I prefer to calm down and solve the problem rather than continuing the argument."

Example: Sometimes I argue with my friends because I care about our relationship. However, I prefer to calm down and solve the problem rather than continuing the argument.

× Yes, I enjoy small talk with my friends, especially some talk about their current situation, the things that we've been through this year that so to just to update each other's about our condition.

✓ Yes, I enjoy small talk with my friends, especially talks about their current situations, the things that we've been through this year, just to update each other about our conditions.

The phrase 'each other's' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'each other' as a reciprocal pronoun without the possessive 's'. Also, 'some talk' should be plural 'talks' to match the context, and 'situation' and 'condition' should be plural to agree with 'their' and 'our' respectively.

× So we usually talk about some anything happen in our life and any updates and any things happen in our life so that we know each other more and also able to strengthen our bonds.

✓ So we usually talk about anything that happens in our lives and any updates so that we know each other better and are also able to strengthen our bonds.

The phrase 'some anything' is incorrect; 'anything' alone suffices. 'Happen' should be 'happens' to agree with singular 'anything'. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' to refer to multiple people. 'Any things' should be 'any updates' or 'things' but not both redundantly. 'Know each other more' is better as 'know each other better'. 'Also able' needs a verb 'are' to be grammatically correct.

× I'll prefer to chat with a group of people like two or three of friends, so that we can have a different topic to talk about and different job to jog around each other, and also is one of the great opportunity to strengthen bonds with many friends so that we can continue our.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people, like two or three friends, so that we can have different topics to talk about and different jokes to joke around with each other, and it is also a great opportunity to strengthen bonds with many friends so that we can continue our friendship.

'I'll prefer' is incorrect; 'I prefer' is the correct present tense. 'Two or three of friends' should be 'two or three friends'. 'Different job to jog around each other' is incorrect; likely meant 'different jokes to joke around with each other'. 'Also is one of the great opportunity' should be 'it is also a great opportunity'. The sentence ends abruptly; added 'friendship' to complete the thought.

× I would prefer to communicate with my friends by face to face because through face through this chance be able to look at each other, facial expression, their gesture, so that we don't have, uh, the chances to get the misunderstanding.

✓ I would prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because through this chance we are able to look at each other's facial expressions and gestures, so that we don't have the chance to misunderstand each other.

The phrase 'by face to face' is incorrect; 'face to face' is used without 'by'. 'Through face through this chance' is redundant and incorrect; simplified to 'through this chance'. 'Facial expression, their gesture' should be plural and possessive: 'each other's facial expressions and gestures'. 'The chances to get the misunderstanding' should be 'the chance to misunderstand each other'.

× I really do this with my friends because I think that my home or relationship. However, when there's argument occur, I would prefer to sit down and calm down and solve the problem rather than just keep arguing with.

✓ I really do argue with my friends because I think it is important for my home and relationships. However, when an argument occurs, I prefer to sit down, calm down, and solve the problem rather than just keep arguing.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I really do this' is vague; corrected to 'I really do argue'. 'My home or relationship' is unclear; changed to 'my home and relationships'. 'When there's argument occur' is incorrect; corrected to 'when an argument occurs'. The sentence ending 'keep arguing with' is incomplete; removed 'with' to complete the sentence properly.