Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: حاول تحسين وضوح إجاباتك وتنظيمها بشكل أفضل. استخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة وتجنب التكرار. ركز على التعبير عن أفكارك بشكل مباشر وبسيط.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day. We often share new information and talk about our language and culture, which helps us stay connected.

Suggestion: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر تنظيماً وتجنب التردد والكلمات الزائدة. استخدم روابط بين الأفكار لجعل الحديث أكثر سلاسة ووضوحاً.

Example: We usually chat about the latest news and share jokes, which makes me happy and relaxed. We also talk about our daily routines to keep in touch.

Suggestion: حاول التعبير عن أفكارك بشكل أوضح وتجنب الكلمات غير المفهومة. استخدم جمل كاملة ومنظمة مع توضيح الأسباب بشكل مباشر.

Example: I prefer chatting with a group of people on WhatsApp because it makes me happy and relaxed. I enjoy sharing conversations with many friends rather than just one.

Suggestion: حاول إكمال أفكارك بشكل كامل واستخدام جمل واضحة ومنظمة. اشرح أسباب تفضيلك بشكل مفصل وباستخدام روابط بين الجمل.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because when my friends visit me, we go outside together. This makes me very happy and strengthens our friendship.

Suggestion: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر وضوحاً وتنظيم الأفكار بشكل أفضل. اشرح كيف تتعامل مع الخلافات بطريقة هادئة وباستخدام أمثلة.

Example: I respect my friends and when we have disagreements, I keep calm and avoid shouting. I believe giving each other space helps maintain our friendship.

× It becomes honest in the few minutes every day or affecting in social media, I have also group in ourself, we sharing some new information and they will sharing our our language and our our culture and our culture and.

✓ It becomes honest in the few minutes every day or affecting on social media, I also have a group ourselves, we share some new information and they share our language and our culture.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'affecting'; it should be 'affecting on social media'. Also, 'group in ourself' is incorrect; it should be 'a group ourselves'. The verb forms 'we sharing' and 'they will sharing' are incorrect; they should be 'we share' and 'they share'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× we sharing some new information and they will sharing our our language and our our culture and our culture and.

✓ we share some new information and they share our language and our culture.

The verb 'sharing' is incorrectly used without auxiliary verbs. The correct form is the simple present 'share' to indicate habitual actions. Also, 'will sharing' is incorrect; it should be 'will share' or simply 'share' depending on context.

× We are chatting about, uh, a new, uh, a new, uh, information about news and uh, we jokes every time and uh, we make it make me very happy and interested and relax in my heart in my life.

✓ We chat about new information and news, and we joke all the time. It makes me very happy, interested, and relaxed in my heart and life.

The sentence is fragmented and contains redundant fillers ('uh'). 'We jokes' is incorrect; it should be 'we joke'. The phrase 'we make it make me' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'it makes me'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And also we share about any of them, uh, our daily routine.

✓ And also we share about our daily routines.

The phrase 'share about any of them' is unclear and incorrect. The preposition 'about' is acceptable here, but 'any of them' is unnecessary and confusing. Simplifying to 'share about our daily routines' improves clarity.

× I prefer a group of people because we have the a group chatting in WhatsApp, We share some, uh, talks.

✓ I prefer a group of people because we have a group chat on WhatsApp. We share some talks.

The phrase 'the a group' contains redundant articles; only one article is needed. 'Group chatting' should be 'group chat' as a noun phrase. Also, 'in WhatsApp' should be 'on WhatsApp' as the correct preposition for platforms.

× I prefer a group of people because we have the a group chatting in WhatsApp, We share some, uh, talks.

✓ I prefer a group of people because we have a group chat on WhatsApp. We share some talks.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'WhatsApp'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to platforms or apps.

× I don't like uh infi Infinity with you all because, umm, because one goes on us.

✓ I don't like infinity with you all because, umm, because one goes on us.

The word 'infi' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'infinity'. The sentence is unclear; however, no direct pronoun misuse is detected here. The sentence may need rephrasing for clarity, but no specific pronoun error is identified.

× No, I prefer face to face because rather than sharing some new information and when we when my friends come to me, we go outside and it makes really it makes to me very happy and.

✓ No, I prefer face to face because rather than sharing some new information, when my friends come to me, we go outside and it really makes me very happy.

The phrase 'makes to me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'makes me'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs commas for clarity. The phrase 'rather than sharing some new information and when we when my friends come to me' is awkward and should be restructured.

× I respect my friend and I put the space between us and me and her and me and I, uh, I focus to be calm and uh, not shouted and not raise my voice.

✓ I respect my friend and I give space between her and me. I focus on being calm and not shouting or raising my voice.

The phrase 'put the space between us and me and her and me and I' is confusing and incorrect. It should be 'give space between her and me'. Also, 'focus to be calm' should be 'focus on being calm'. The verbs 'not shouted' and 'not raise' should be 'not shouting' and 'not raising' to maintain parallel structure.