Museum— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Please check your grammar, especially subject-verb agreement and plural forms. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'historical important thing', say 'important historical artifacts'.

Example: Yes, I think museums are very important because they collect many important historical artifacts. They also provide a great learning environment for children and people interested in history.

Suggestion: Please clarify your answer with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid vague phrases like 'the thing called horsing in Siam'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: Yes, there are several museums in my hometown. The most famous one is called 'Horsing in Siam', which many people visit every Saturday and Sunday.

Suggestion: Improve your grammar by using correct verb forms and sentence structure. For example, say 'I am not interested in history' instead of 'I don't interest in history'. Also, try to expand your answer with reasons or examples.

Example: No, I don't often visit museums because I am not very interested in history. However, I sometimes go if there is a special exhibition.

Suggestion: Please use correct past tense verbs and improve sentence clarity. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'very refreshing' and try to describe your experience more specifically.

Example: The last time I visited a museum was in September 2018 when my school took the grade 9 students to a museum in Uthai Thani Province, Thailand. It was an unforgettable experience because I learned a lot about local history.

× Yes, I think museums is very important because it collects a lot of historical important thing and it is a good place for children or people who interested in history.

✓ Yes, I think museums are very important because they collect a lot of historically important things and they are good places for children or people who are interested in history.

The subject 'museums' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' (Singular and plural issue). Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'a lot of'. 'It collects' should be 'they collect' to agree with plural 'museums'. 'People who interested' should be 'people who are interested' to form the correct relative clause.

× Yes, I think museums is very important because it collects a lot of historical important thing and it is a good place for children or people who interested in history.

✓ Yes, I think museums are very important because they collect a lot of historically important things and they are good places for children or people who are interested in history.

The phrase 'historical important thing' is incorrect; 'historically important things' is the correct form because 'historically' is an adverb modifying 'important', and 'things' should be plural.

× Yes, I think museums is very important because it collects a lot of historical important thing and it is a good place for children or people who interested in history.

✓ Yes, I think museums are very important because they collect a lot of historically important things and they are good places for children or people who are interested in history.

The verb 'collects' is singular but should be plural 'collect' to agree with plural subject 'museums'. Also, 'it is a good place' should be 'they are good places' to agree with plural subject.

× Yes, I think museums is very important because it collects a lot of historical important thing and it is a good place for children or people who interested in history.

✓ Yes, I think museums are very important because they collect a lot of historically important things and they are good places for children or people who are interested in history.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'museums' which is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'they'.

× the most renownable 1 is the thing called horsing in Siam.

✓ The most renowned one is the thing called horsing in Siam.

The word 'renownable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'renowned'. Also, '1' should be 'one' as a pronoun.

× the most renownable 1 is the thing called horsing in Siam.

✓ The most renowned one is the thing called horsing in Siam.

The sentence structure is awkward; 'the most renowned one' is the correct phrase to refer to the most famous museum.

× People attend to that museum every Saturday and Sunday.

✓ People attend that museum every Saturday and Sunday.

The verb 'attend' does not require the preposition 'to' when referring to events or places; 'attend that museum' is correct.

× No, because actually I don't interest in history so I do not prefer visiting a museum.

✓ No, because actually I am not interested in history so I do not prefer visiting museums.

The phrase 'I don't interest in history' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I am not interested in history'. Also, 'visiting a museum' can be pluralized to 'visiting museums' for general preference.

× The last time I visit a museum was in September 2018 when the school bring grade 9 students from my school to the museum located in Utah Province in Thailand.

✓ The last time I visited a museum was in September 2018 when the school brought grade 9 students from my school to the museum located in Utah Province in Thailand.

The verbs 'visit' and 'bring' should be in past tense 'visited' and 'brought' to match the past time reference 'The last time'.

× I was very refreshing and it was such a memorable visit.

✓ I felt very refreshed and it was such a memorable visit.

'I was very refreshing' is incorrect because 'refreshing' describes something that causes refreshment; the correct adjective to describe a feeling is 'refreshed'.