Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Người học nên trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, cùng ai, mục đích). Ví dụ: "Yes, I go regularly on weekdays with my friends to study or borrow books." Học viên cần bỏ các cụm vô nghĩa như “I’m a nerd” nếu không muốn, hoặc dùng 1 lần và giải thích ngắn gọn. Nên thay "going to library" thành "going to the library" và sửa thì: "I often go to the library on weekdays with my best friend to study."

Example: Yes, I often go to the library on weekdays. I usually go with my best friend to study together and borrow books for our classes.

Suggestion: Cần dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và ngắn, sau đó nêu chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động (đọc, nghiên cứu, mượn sách) và thể loại sách yêu thích. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (vd. "when I'm work" -> "when I work"), dùng giới từ đúng ("use" không đúng ở đây, nên là "read" hoặc "borrow"). Hãy sắp xếp ý theo thứ tự logic: mục đích → hành động → ví dụ thể loại sách. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

Example: When I go to the library, I usually read or study quietly. I often choose detective novels because I like suspense, but sometimes I borrow romance books for a change.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No), sau đó mô tả ngắn gọn về thói quen thời thơ ấu với chi tiết cụ thể (ai đưa bạn đi, tần suất, lý do). Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không đúng ("when I'm a child" -> "when I was a child", "they were Emmy to her reader" không rõ nghĩa; có thể nói: "my parents encouraged reading"). Giữ 2-3 câu rõ ràng: chủ đề + lý do/chi tiết.

Example: Yes, I went to the library regularly when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to read, so they often took me there on weekdays to choose books.

Suggestion: Không nên đoán đại hoặc nói thiếu thông tin. Hãy trả lời thẳng và nêu rõ hạn chế thông tin cá nhân, rồi đưa nhận định có cơ sở hoặc nói rằng bạn không chắc. Sửa lỗi từ vựng ("kiss" -> "kids"), ngữ pháp và cấu trúc ("every child children they always like books" -> "many children like books"). Một cách an toàn là: "I'm not sure, but I think..." và nêu lý do ngắn (văn hóa đọc, hệ thống trường học).

Example: I'm not sure because I don't know many Chinese children personally, but I think many of them do visit libraries because schools and parents often encourage reading.

× I'm I'm a nerd so I prefer going to library especially on my weekdays and I often go with my friends and and my best friend too.

✓ I'm a nerd, so I prefer going to the library, especially on weekdays, and I often go with my friends and my best friend too.

The noun 'library' is a specific place that requires the definite article 'the' in this context. Also remove redundant 'I'm' and duplicate 'and', and 'on my weekdays' should be simply 'on weekdays' for natural usage.

× I always share some best rivalry to be friends.

✓ I always share friendly rivalry with my friends.

The phrase 'some best rivalry to be friends' is ungrammatical. Use 'friendly rivalry' to express a good-natured competitive relationship. 'Share' with 'friendly rivalry' is natural; remove 'some' and reorder words.

× I'm first when I'm work in the library I will choose my best book.

✓ First, when I work in the library, I choose my favorite book.

The original mixes tenses and has wrong word order. Use 'First' as a discourse marker, 'when I work' present simple for habitual action, and 'choose my favorite book' for habitual present. 'My best book' is changed to 'my favorite book' for natural English.

× I like detective so I always use something in horror books and I also choose romantic books too.

✓ I like detective stories, so I sometimes read horror books and I also choose romantic books.

'Like detective' should be 'like detective stories' or 'detective novels'. 'Always use something in horror books' is unclear; 'sometimes read horror books' fits better. Remove redundant 'too'.

× I would say that is always because when I'm a child, my parents, they were Emmy to her reader.

✓ I would say so because when I was a child, my parents encouraged me to read.

'When I'm a child' is wrong tense; use 'when I was a child'. The phrase about parents is unclear: 'they were Emmy to her reader' is nonsensical—likely 'encouraged me to read'. Use past tense 'encouraged' for past habit.

× So I always go to the library on weekdays in the past.

✓ So I always went to the library on weekdays in the past.

'In the past' with a habitual past action requires past tense 'went' rather than 'go'. Use 'went' to match 'in the past'. Alternatively drop 'in the past' and rely on 'when I was a child'.

× I am this a hard question because I don't get in touch with any Chinese kiss.

✓ This is a hard question because I don't come into contact with many Chinese kids.

'I am this a hard question' is ungrammatical; start with 'This is a hard question'. 'Don't get in touch with any Chinese kiss' has wrong word 'kiss' and phrasing; use 'come into contact with' and 'kids'.

× So I say that it's yes because every child children they always like books.

✓ So I would say yes because children generally like books.

'Every child children they' is redundant and mixes singular/plural. Use either 'every child' (singular) with singular verb or 'children' (plural) without 'every' plus 'they'. 'They always like' changed to 'generally like' for more natural phrasing.