Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "read some books" twice and improve grammar, e.g., "one of my hobbies". Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I often visit libraries because I enjoy reading novels and essays. Going there helps me feel relaxed and calm, which is why I make it a regular habit.

Suggestion: Your answer covers different activities but could be more structured and natural. Use linking words like "and" or "also" to connect ideas, and avoid repeating "sometimes". Try to be more specific about the projects or journals.

Example: In the library, I usually read essays or novels. I also prepare work projects for my company and sometimes write personal journals to reflect on my day.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but contains grammar errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "we used to write some like picture books" is unclear. Also, "very happiest" should be "the happiest." Try to clarify and use correct grammar.

Example: Yes, when I was a child, my mom took me to the library every week. We borrowed English books and enjoyed reading picture books together. Those were some of the happiest moments of my life.

Suggestion: Your answer is honest but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid filler words like "umm" and improve grammar, e.g., "most Koreans don't frequently go to the library." Also, try to give a more complete answer with linking words.

Example: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Korea, most students don't often visit libraries because they are busy studying and preparing for exams.

× Yes, I frequently go to the libraries to read some books and one of my hobby is to read some books such as like novels or some essays.

✓ Yes, I frequently go to the library to read some books and one of my hobbies is to read books such as novels or essays.

The word 'libraries' should be singular 'library' because the context implies a general place, not multiple libraries. Also, 'one of my hobby' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my hobbies' because 'hobby' is countable and plural is needed after 'one of my'. The phrase 'such as like' is redundant; use either 'such as' or 'like'.

× I usually read my favorite kinds of books, such as essays or novels, and I sometimes prepare some projects of my company or sometimes I just like writing some journals for myself.

✓ I usually read my favorite kinds of books, such as essays or novels, and I sometimes prepare some projects for my company or sometimes I just like writing journals for myself.

The phrase 'projects of my company' is better expressed as 'projects for my company' to indicate purpose. Also, 'some journals' is acceptable but 'journals' alone is more natural here. No plural error but preposition correction is needed.

× Yes, I when I was a kid, my mom took me to the library and we used to write some like picture books and borrowing some English books once a week.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, my mom took me to the library and we used to read picture books and borrow some English books once a week.

The phrase 'we used to write some like picture books' is incorrect; children usually read picture books, not write them. Also, 'borrowing' should be 'borrow' to maintain parallel structure with 'used to read'. The verb forms need to be consistent in past tense.

× So it was very happiest moment of my life.

✓ So it was the happiest moment of my life.

The phrase 'very happiest' is incorrect because 'happiest' is a superlative adjective and does not need 'very'. Also, the definite article 'the' is required before superlative adjectives.

× I'm not sure about that question because I'm not Chinese. I'm Korean, but usually I think UMM most of the Koreans doesn't frequently go to library because they're so busy studying umm and doing some homework preparing for the test.

✓ I'm not sure about that question because I'm not Chinese. I'm Korean, but usually I think most Koreans don't frequently go to the library because they're so busy studying and doing homework preparing for tests.

'Most of the Koreans' should be 'most Koreans' without 'the'. The verb 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural subject 'most Koreans'. 'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the library'. 'Doing some homework' is better as 'doing homework' for general activity. 'Preparing for the test' should be plural 'preparing for tests' to indicate generality.