Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating words like 'nearby' and 'spot'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you could say 'I sometimes go to the library because changing my environment once in a while makes me feel better. Moreover, the library near my home is a green building with a beautiful design, which even attracts tourists for photos.'

Example: I sometimes visit the library because changing my environment once in a while helps me feel refreshed. Moreover, the library near my home is an eco-friendly building with a stunning design, making it a popular spot for tourists to take photos.

Suggestion: Your answer contains useful information but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, 'I often practice coding and English in the library because I recently quit my job and am preparing for job interviews. Therefore, I need to work on algorithm problems and improve my English for international company tests.'

Example: I usually practice coding and English in the library because I recently left my job and am preparing for interviews. Therefore, I focus on solving algorithm problems and enhancing my English skills for tests required by international companies.

Suggestion: Your answer starts well but ends abruptly and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and provide more specific details. Also, avoid vague references. For example, 'Yes, I often went to the library as a child. One memorable story I read was about the mathematician Goss, who was a child prodigy and famously drew a 17-sided polygon using only a ruler and compass.'

Example: Yes, I often visited the library when I was a child. I remember reading about the mathematician Goss, who was a genius as a kid and managed to construct a 17-sided polygon using just a ruler and compass.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas. For example, you could say, 'Yes, many children in Taiwan often go to the library because of the intense academic competition. After regular classes, they usually stay to complete homework and prepare for exams the next day.'

Example: Yes, many kids in Taiwan frequently visit the library due to the high academic pressure. After school, they often stay to finish their homework and study for upcoming exams.

× Yes, I sometimes go to the library because changing the environment once a while makes me feel better.

✓ Yes, I sometimes go to the library because changing the environment once in a while makes me feel better.

The phrase 'once a while' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' to form the idiom 'once in a while', meaning occasionally.

× Also the library nearby me nearby my home is a green building with a beautiful design.

✓ Also, the library near my home is a green building with a beautiful design.

The phrase 'nearby me nearby my home' is redundant and incorrect. 'Near my home' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate location.

× It is even a spot tourist spot for photos.

✓ It is even a tourist spot for photos.

The phrase 'a spot tourist spot' is redundant and incorrectly ordered. The correct phrase is 'a tourist spot'.

× I often practice coding and English in library.

✓ I often practice coding and English in the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Since I recently I quit my job and prepare for the job interview, so I have to practice a lot of algorithm problems and English for the for international company test.

✓ Since I recently quit my job and am preparing for a job interview, I have to practice a lot of algorithm problems and English for the international company test.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions and incorrect verb forms. 'Since' introduces a reason, so 'so' is unnecessary. Also, 'prepare' should be in present continuous 'am preparing' to indicate ongoing action. The phrase 'for the for international company test' has an extra 'for' and should be corrected.

× Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× The most impressive story I remember there was the mathematician Goss, who was a genius when he was a child and he drew a 17 side Polygon by ruler and.

✓ The most impressive story I remember there is about the mathematician Goss, who was a genius when he was a child and drew a 17-sided polygon using a ruler.

The sentence has incomplete and awkward phrasing. 'Was' should be 'is' to indicate the story is currently remembered. '17 side Polygon' should be '17-sided polygon' with a hyphen and lowercase 'polygon'. 'By ruler and' is incomplete; 'using a ruler' is correct.

× Yes, because in Taiwan there is a heavy pressure of academic competition, so students after the regular course, they have to prepare their homework and the exam next day.

✓ Yes, because in Taiwan there is heavy pressure from academic competition, so students, after their regular courses, have to prepare their homework and the exam for the next day.

The phrase 'pressure of academic competition' should be 'pressure from academic competition'. 'After the regular course' should be 'after their regular courses'. 'The exam next day' needs the preposition 'for' and article 'the' to become 'the exam for the next day'.

× So this is a very common phenomenon.

✓ So, this is a very common phenomenon.

Adding a comma after 'So' improves sentence clarity and flow.