Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is short and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your answer more natural and complete by using correct sentence structures and adding more details. For example, say 'Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate on my studies.'

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate on my studies and find useful books.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and lacks linking words. Try to use correct tenses and connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say 'When I go to the library, I first search for the book I want to read, and then I sit at a table to read it quietly.'

Example: When I go to the library, I first search for the book I want to read, and then I sit at a table to read it quietly.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammar errors. Try to use past tense correctly and explain your idea clearly. For example, say 'No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I did not understand what a library was. But now, I always try to visit the library.'

Example: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I did not understand what a library was. But now, I always try to visit the library.

Suggestion: Your answer is not relevant and unclear. Try to answer directly and politely if you do not know. For example, say 'I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my country, many children go to the library to study.'

Example: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my country, many children go to the library to study.

× Library is a quite a place where I can study and it's good for.

✓ The library is quite a place where I can study and it's good for me.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required before the noun. Also, 'a quite a place' is incorrect; it should be 'quite a place'. Additionally, the phrase 'it's good for' is incomplete and needs an object, so 'me' is added for clarity.

× When I go to the library, first I search my book what I would like to read and then I sat on the table and try to read.

✓ When I go to the library, first I search for the book that I would like to read, then I sit at the table and try to read.

The phrase 'search my book what I would like to read' is incorrect; it should be 'search for the book that I would like to read' to use the correct preposition and relative pronoun. Also, 'sat' is past tense, but the sentence is in present tense, so it should be 'sit'. The preposition 'on the table' is incorrect; it should be 'at the table' when referring to sitting at a table.

× When I go to the library, first I search my book what I would like to read and then I sat on the table and try to read.

✓ When I go to the library, first I search for the book that I would like to read, then I sit at the table and try to read.

The verb 'sat' is past tense, but the sentence is describing habitual actions in the present, so the verb should be in present tense 'sit' to maintain tense consistency.

× No, when I was a kid I don't go to library because and then I don't understand what is a library and right now I always try to go to the library.

✓ No, when I was a kid I didn't go to the library because I didn't understand what a library was, and right now I always try to go to the library.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Don't go' should be 'didn't go' to match past tense. Also, 'don't understand' should be 'didn't understand' for past tense. The phrase 'what is a library' should be 'what a library was' to fit indirect speech in past tense. The definite article 'the' is missing before 'library'.

× No, when I was a kid I don't go to library because and then I don't understand what is a library and right now I always try to go to the library.

✓ No, when I was a kid I didn't go to the library because I didn't understand what a library was, and right now I always try to go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Missing 'the' before 'library' is incorrect.

× To be honest, I don't know because I'm a Bangladeshi people, so Chinese people, Chinese, sorry, Chinese student or people who go to the library or go to the cinema, I don't know.

✓ To be honest, I don't know because I'm Bangladeshi, so I don't know if Chinese students or people go to the library or the cinema.

'I'm a Bangladeshi people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and cannot be used with 'a'. It should be 'I'm Bangladeshi'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and redundant. 'Chinese student or people' should be 'Chinese students or people'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'cinema'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.