Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh dùng cụm từ "take out" mà nên dùng "borrow" khi nói về việc mượn sách từ thư viện.

Example: Yes, I usually go to the library during summer vacations because it provides a peaceful atmosphere where I can fully concentrate on my studies. Moreover, I often borrow books and other study materials to help me prepare for exams.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "libraries computer" nên là "the library's computer" hoặc "computers in the library". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I usually go to the library to study and complete my assignments. In addition, I like to borrow books and study materials related to my course. Sometimes, I use the library's computer to search for information on the Internet.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý chính tả và ngữ pháp, ví dụ "when I was a try" nên là "when I was a child". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I didn't go to the library much when I was a child because I preferred spending time playing outdoors with my friends. At that age, I wasn't very interested in reading or studying, so I usually chose to have fun in the playground instead of focusing on my studies.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "promote their studying" nên là "promote studying" và "achieve successful" nên là "achieve success". Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn và thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I think so. In China, people always promote studying because they believe it is the quickest way to achieve success.

× I also like to borrow the book and study material which related to my course.

✓ I also like to borrow books and study materials which are related to my course.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular forms 'the book' and 'study material' when referring to general items. Plural forms 'books' and 'study materials' are appropriate here to indicate multiple items. Also, the relative clause needs the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct.

× Sometimes I use libraries computer to search information in the Internet.

✓ Sometimes I use the library's computer to search for information on the Internet.

The phrase 'libraries computer' lacks possessive form and article. It should be 'the library's computer'. Also, 'search information in the Internet' is incorrect; the correct prepositions are 'search for information on the Internet'.

× I didn't go to the library much when I was a try because I preferred spending time playing with my friends outdoors.

✓ I didn't go to the library much when I was a child because I preferred spending time playing with my friends outdoors.

The word 'try' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'child' to refer to the speaker's younger age. This is a vocabulary error affecting past tense narration.

× At that age, I wasn't very interested in reading or studying, so I usually choose to have fun in the playground instead of focusing on my studies.

✓ At that age, I wasn't very interested in reading or studying, so I usually chose to have fun in the playground instead of focusing on my studies.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the context is past ('wasn't interested'), the verb 'choose' should be in past tense 'chose' to maintain tense consistency.

× I think yes, in that country people always promote their studying and I think studying is the shortest way to achieve successful.

✓ I think yes, in that country people always promote studying and I think studying is the shortest way to achieve success.

The phrase 'promote their studying' is awkward; 'promote studying' is more natural. Also, 'achieve successful' is incorrect; the noun 'success' should be used instead of the adjective 'successful'.