Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng hơi dài và có phần lặp lại. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó dùng các từ nối để làm rõ ý và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ lý do không thích thư viện và đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

Example: I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home where it's quiet. Moreover, some people in the library make loud noises, which distracts me from concentrating.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng và có sự lặp từ 'afford' và 'expensive'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

Example: I usually read English books in the library because they are expensive to buy, so the library gives me access to materials I otherwise couldn't afford.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý thì động từ cho phù hợp (quá khứ) và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt hơn và dùng từ nối để liên kết ý.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child. However, I was quite noisy and often played hide and seek, which probably disturbed other visitors.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự tự tin và có phần không phù hợp khi nói 'How do I know?'. Bạn nên trả lời lịch sự và đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân rõ ràng, tránh dùng câu hỏi tu từ không cần thiết.

Example: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I believe they often go to the library because they are known for being hardworking and achieving good academic results.

× I usually read books about English and I find books that I couldn't afford to read because it was too expensive and not affordable.

✓ I usually read books about English and I find books that I couldn't afford to read because they were too expensive and not affordable.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'books', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'books'. This is an issue of pronoun agreement and preposition use.

× Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid, but at that time I am really noisy and I play hide and seek in there, so I think that I am disturbing people at that time.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid, but at that time I was really noisy and I played hide and seek there, so I think that I disturbed people at that time.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the action happened in the past, all verbs should be in the past tense: 'was', 'played', and 'disturbed'. Also, 'in there' is better as 'there' for natural expression.

× How do I know? Because I from Vietnam and I'm a Vietnamese person.

✓ How do I know? Because I am from Vietnam and I'm a Vietnamese person.

The verb 'am' is missing after the subject 'I'. The correct phrase is 'I am from Vietnam'. This is a sentence structure and verb usage issue.

× But I think that Chinese kids go to library often because they are really good at studying and they have best achievements.

✓ But I think that Chinese kids go to the library often because they are really good at studying and they have the best achievements.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'best achievements' should be preceded by 'the' to indicate a superlative form.