Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, say "I don't go to the library often because I usually search for information on the Internet."

Example: I don't go to the library often because I usually search for information on the Internet, which is more convenient for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, say "When I go to the library, I usually find a book about a sport I like. Then, I spend my afternoon reading and relaxing there."

Example: When I go to the library, I usually find a book about a sport I like. Then, I spend my afternoon reading and relaxing there.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to respond directly and clearly. For example, say "Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. My teacher often took us there during elementary school to read books."

Example: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. My teacher often took us there during elementary school to read books.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains errors. Try to clarify your point and use correct grammar. For example, say "No, Chinese kids don't often go to the library nowadays because they usually use computers to find information."

Example: No, Chinese kids don't often go to the library nowadays because they usually use computers to find information.

× No, I don't go to library often because right now I just search every data on the Internet.

✓ No, I don't go to the library often because right now I just search for all data on the Internet.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required. Also, 'search every data' is incorrect; 'data' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'all' or 'any', and 'search for' is the correct verb phrase.

× When I go to library, I usually find a sport like I like and I will take a book and just start chilling reading a book there and spend my whole afternoon there.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually find a sport I like and I will take a book and just start chilling, reading a book there and spend my whole afternoon there.

Again, 'go to library' should be 'go to the library' because the definite article is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'like I like' is redundant; 'a sport I like' is sufficient.

× It's a thing when I do when I go to library.

✓ It's something I do when I go to the library.

'Go to library' should be 'go to the library' due to the need for the definite article. Also, 'It's a thing when I do' is awkward; 'It's something I do' is more natural.

× Yes, I've got a library. I'm a kid because there's a class in my elementary school which teacher will bring us to library and read at the library.

✓ Yes, I had access to a library when I was a kid because there was a class in my elementary school where the teacher would bring us to the library to read.

'I've got a library. I'm a kid' is incorrect tense and phrasing; it should be past tense 'I had access to a library when I was a kid'. Also, 'bring us to library' needs 'the' before 'library'. 'Which teacher' should be 'where the teacher' for correct relative clause and article usage.

× So I've I've been to library when I'm a child.

✓ So I've been to the library when I was a child.

'Been to library' requires 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'when I'm a child' should be past tense 'when I was a child' to match the time frame.

× No, Chinese kid doesn't go to the library right now because ladies use the computer to search everything, so they don't usually go to library now.

✓ No, Chinese kids don't go to the library right now because they use computers to search for everything, so they don't usually go to the library now.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match the plural verb 'don't'. Also, 'ladies' is inconsistent; 'they' is better to refer to 'kids'. 'Use the computer' should be plural 'use computers'. 'Go to library' again needs 'the' before 'library'. 'Search everything' should be 'search for everything'.