Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using correct tense, and avoiding redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two supporting details using linking words.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books. I usually use my membership card to access the library and spend time there exploring different genres.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases and try to provide more specific details.

Example: In the library, I usually read self-help and romantic novels because I find romantic stories fascinating. For instance, I enjoy books that explore relationships and personal growth.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and lacks clarity. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words.

Example: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library and read many books written in Nepali. For example, I enjoyed stories about women's empowerment and children's tales.

Suggestion: Your answer does not directly address the question and includes irrelevant information. Try to acknowledge your uncertainty but still attempt to answer the question briefly, then add a related personal experience with linking words.

Example: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my experience as a Nepali student, the school library was a calm and quiet place where we could explore various topics and improve our reading skills.

× I love to go to library and I usually used to go to library.

✓ I love to go to the library and I usually used to go to the library.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I usually used to go to library.

✓ I usually used to go to the library.

The phrase 'used to' already indicates past habitual action, so 'usually' is redundant but acceptable. However, the article 'the' is missing before 'library'. The main issue is the missing article, but the tense usage is correct.

× whenever I went to library I used to have a library membership card and with that I get permission to enter library and stay there for.

✓ Whenever I went to the library, I used to have a library membership card, and with that, I got permission to enter the library and stay there.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'get' should be in past tense 'got' to match the past context. The sentence was incomplete and needed proper punctuation and completion.

× with that I get permission to enter library and stay there for.

✓ With that, I got permission to enter the library and stay there.

The verb 'get' should be in past tense 'got' to match the past context indicated by 'used to' and 'went'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× I usually love to read self help books and romantic books as I am a romantic person.

✓ I usually love to read self-help books and romantic books as I am a romantic person.

The phrase 'self help' should be hyphenated as 'self-help' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× I am so much fascinated with romantic love story books.

✓ I am very fascinated with romantic love story books.

The phrase 'so much fascinated' is incorrect. The correct adverb to modify 'fascinated' is 'very'. 'So much' is not used before past participles in this way.

× I used to buy a lot of books which was written in Nepali language and I used to go through all of the books and enjoyed reading.

✓ I used to buy a lot of books which were written in the Nepali language, and I used to go through all of the books and enjoy reading.

The relative clause refers to 'books' which is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was'. Also, 'enjoyed' should be 'enjoy' to maintain parallel structure with 'used to go through'. The article 'the' is needed before 'Nepali language'.

× which was written in Nepali language

✓ which were written in the Nepali language

The noun 'language' requires the definite article 'the' when specifying a particular language. Also, 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'were'.

× and enjoyed reading.

✓ and enjoy reading.

After 'used to', the verb should be in base form to indicate habitual past action. 'Enjoyed' is past tense and incorrect here.

× It used to be of women's empowerment book or some kind of child stories book which was part.

✓ They used to be women's empowerment books or some kind of children's stories books which were part of it.

The subject 'books' is plural, so 'It' should be 'They'. Also, 'women's empowerment book' should be plural 'books'. 'Child stories book' should be 'children's stories books'. The verb 'was' should be 'were' to agree with plural subject. The sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× It used to be of women's empowerment book or some kind of child stories book which was part.

✓ They used to be women's empowerment books or some kind of children's stories books which were part of it.

The subject refers to multiple books, so plural forms and verbs are needed. Also, 'child stories' should be 'children's stories' to be grammatically correct.

× I don't know about Chinese kids because I'm Nepali kids and I used to go to the library in our own school.

✓ I don't know about Chinese kids because I'm a Nepali kid and I used to go to the library in our own school.

The pronoun 'I'm' (I am) should be followed by singular noun 'a Nepali kid' to match the singular subject 'I'. 'Kids' is plural and incorrect here.

× I used to go to the library in our own school.

✓ I used to go to the library in our own school.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× It was so much calm and quiet place where we used to explore different topics and improve our reading skills.

✓ It was a very calm and quiet place where we used to explore different topics and improve our reading skills.

The phrase 'so much calm' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a very calm'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'calm and quiet place'.