Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I usually go to the library on weekends with my friends because I enjoy finding new books to read. It helps me broaden my horizons and spend quality time with them.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Example: I usually read books in the library because it helps me broaden my horizons and learn new things. Sometimes, I also do my homework there.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi lặp từ.

Example: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because my primary school had a big library. It had many books like fairy tales and funny comics.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và chính xác hơn, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

Example: I am Vietnamese, so I am not sure about Chinese kids. However, I believe that most students around the world often go to the library to study and enjoy reading new books.

× it's helped me project my horizon and have a memory time with my friends.

✓ it helps me broaden my horizon and have memorable times with my friends.

The phrase 'it's helped' incorrectly uses the past participle 'helped' with 'it is'. The correct present tense 'it helps' fits the context better. Also, 'project my horizon' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'broaden my horizon'. 'Have a memory time' is unnatural; 'have memorable times' is more appropriate.

× I often read book in my in the library because it help me broaden my horizon and news and learn new knowledge.

✓ I often read books in the library because it helps me broaden my horizon, learn news, and gain new knowledge.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the context. The phrase 'in my in the library' is redundant; 'in the library' suffices. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'and news and learn new knowledge' is awkward; rephrased for clarity.

× And sometimes I do I do my homework as library.

✓ And sometimes I do my homework at the library.

The phrase 'as library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' to indicate location. The repeated 'I do' is a redundancy and should be removed.

× Yes I I went to the library when I was a kid because in my primary school is have a big library and in this library have many book like fairy tale or a funny comic.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because my primary school had a big library, and this library had many books like fairy tales and funny comics.

The phrase 'is have' is incorrect; 'had' is the correct past tense of 'have'. 'In this library have many book' should be 'this library had many books' to agree in number and tense. 'Fairy tale' and 'a funny comic' should be pluralized to 'fairy tales' and 'funny comics'.

× I I am Vietnamese person so I don't know about the Chinese kids.

✓ I am Vietnamese, so I don't know much about Chinese kids.

'Vietnamese person' is awkward; 'Vietnamese' suffices. 'About the Chinese kids' is better as 'about Chinese kids' without 'the' for general reference.

× So I think all students in the world often go to library to learn and answers new book to read and which make them enjoyable with study.

✓ So I think all students in the world often go to the library to learn and find new books to read, which makes studying enjoyable for them.

'Go to library' requires the definite article 'the' as 'library' is a specific place. 'Answers new book' is incorrect; 'find new books' is appropriate. 'Which make them enjoyable with study' should be 'which makes studying enjoyable for them' for correct subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing.