Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is brief and somewhat off-topic because you mention a specific book rather than focusing on your library visits. To improve, directly answer the question first, then add a relevant detail about your library habits. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your response natural and concise.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading. For example, I usually borrow fiction books like adventure novels, which help me relax and learn new things.

Suggestion: Your answer provides relevant information but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correcting minor grammar errors. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'Silence' at the end. Try to be more specific about what you do and why.

Example: I usually visit the library every Sunday to read various books. For instance, I enjoy history books and a favorite of mine is 'Self Improvement,' which I prefer to read there because it's quiet and peaceful.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but contains a grammar mistake ('choosed' should be 'chose'). Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add a bit more detail to enrich your response.

Example: Yes, I went to the library once with my mother when I was a kid. I chose a storybook from the kids' section, and after we came home, I asked my mother to read it to me because I loved listening to stories.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains a generalization that may sound unnatural. Instead, focus on providing specific reasons why Chinese kids visit libraries and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid subjective judgments like 'they are so intelligent.'

Example: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because they want to learn more about their history and culture. Moreover, they use the library to gain knowledge and develop good study habits.

× I read a lot of books, some of them are related to the history and there's one of my favorite book called Self Improvement which I prefer to read in the library.

✓ I read a lot of books, some of them are related to history and there's one of my favorite books called Self Improvement which I prefer to read in the library.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'history' and 'book'. 'History' is an uncountable noun here and does not require 'the'. Also, 'one of my favorite book' should be plural 'books' because 'one of' refers to a member of a group.

× I choosed A storybook from the kids section and we came back home.

✓ I chose a storybook from the kids section and we came back home.

The verb 'choosed' is incorrect; the past tense of 'choose' is 'chose'. Also, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' as it is in the middle of the sentence.