Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. Also, watch for grammar and article usage, such as 'on those occasions' and 'to the library'.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library, especially when my Internet is slow or when I can't find certain articles online. On those occasions, the library is a reliable place to access resources.

Suggestion: Your answer lists activities but could be more fluid and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to combine related ideas into fewer sentences for better coherence.

Example: In the library, I usually read books quietly because it's important to respect the silence rule. I also keep my phone on silent mode and sometimes use the library's Internet to do research.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use past tense consistently and express your feelings clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Example: To be honest, I didn't go to the library much when I was a kid because I found it boring rather than interesting.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a direct opinion with clear reasons and examples. Use correct verb tenses and avoid vague statements.

Example: I think many Chinese kids do go to the library because education is highly valued in China. Libraries provide a good environment for learning and gaining knowledge.

× Definitely when the Internet is slow in my house and some articles are not well published on the Internet, so on that occasions I usually go to library.

✓ Definitely, when the Internet is slow at my house and some articles are not well published on the Internet, so on those occasions I usually go to the library.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to a specific location like 'my house'. 'On that occasions' is incorrect; it should be 'on those occasions' because 'occasions' is plural. Also, 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× Definitely when the Internet is slow in my house and some articles are not well published on the Internet, so on that occasions I usually go to library.

✓ Definitely, when the Internet is slow at my house and some articles are not well published on the Internet, so on those occasions I usually go to the library.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× First of all, I read the books. Secondly, I sit quiet because in the library there is a rule to keep silent.

✓ First of all, I read books. Secondly, I sit quietly because in the library there is a rule to keep silent.

'Quiet' is an adjective and cannot describe the verb 'sit'. The correct adverb form is 'quietly'. Also, 'the books' is too specific unless referring to particular books; 'books' is more natural here.

× Moreover, I also keep my phone on silent mode and read my books and use the Internet in the library.

✓ Moreover, I also keep my phone on silent mode, read my books, and use the Internet in the library.

No article error here, but adding commas improves clarity. 'My books' is acceptable if referring to personal books.

× Well, to be honest, I didn't go to the library when I was young because it makes me feel boring and rather than feel felt interesting.

✓ Well, to be honest, I didn't go to the library when I was young because it made me feel bored rather than interested.

The verb tense should be past tense 'made' to match 'didn't go'. 'Feel boring' is incorrect; 'feel bored' is correct to express personal feeling. 'Feel felt interesting' is incorrect; 'interested' is the correct adjective.

× It completely depends upon the choice of the Chinese people. But I think most of the Chinese people went to library and both library in future because the people are very smart, so this reflect that they have much knowledge about things.

✓ It completely depends upon the choice of the Chinese people. But I think most Chinese people go to libraries and both libraries in the future because the people are very smart, so this reflects that they have much knowledge about things.

'Most of the Chinese people' can be simplified to 'most Chinese people'. 'Went to library' should be 'go to libraries' to indicate habitual action and plural form. 'Both library' should be 'both libraries'. 'This reflect' should be 'this reflects' to agree with singular subject.