Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of 'I do not go to the library regularly, but I go there especially for doing my assignment and bringing books which helps me to read on Saturday,' you can say, 'I don't visit the library regularly, but I usually go there on Saturdays to do my assignments and borrow books for reading.'

Example: I don't visit the library regularly, but I usually go there on Saturdays to do my assignments and borrow books for reading.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better sentence structure and linking words to make it coherent. Also, avoid grammatical errors like 'a quite a place.' Try to use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. For example, 'I usually go to the library to do my assignments because it is a quiet place where I can read and write to explore my ideas.'

Example: I usually go to the library to do my assignments because it is a quiet place where I can read and write to explore my ideas.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use past tense consistently and clarify your ideas. For example, 'Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I was curious and needed to do research, especially for my school projects.'

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I was curious and needed to do research, especially for my school projects.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a more direct and natural response. For example, 'I'm not sure about the habits of Chinese kids, but I think those who want to learn often visit the library, while others may not.'

Example: I'm not sure about the habits of Chinese kids, but I think those who want to learn often visit the library, while others may not.

× I do not go to the library regularly, but I go there especially for doing my assignment and bringing books which helps me to read on Saturday.

✓ I do not go to the library regularly, but I go there especially to do my assignment and to bring books which help me to read on Saturday.

The verbs 'doing' and 'bringing' are incorrectly used after 'for'. After 'for', the base form of the verb or the infinitive 'to' + verb should be used to express purpose. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' because it refers to 'books' (plural).

× I usually visit there to do my assignment and the library is a quite a place and I would love to read there, write something which I want to explore my idea.

✓ I usually visit the library to do my assignment, and the library is quite a quiet place. I would love to read there and write something to explore my ideas.

The phrase 'visit there' is incorrect; 'visit' does not require 'there'. 'A quite a place' is incorrect; it should be 'quite a quiet place'. Also, 'write something which I want to explore my idea' is awkward; it should be 'write something to explore my ideas'.

× Absolutely. I visited your library when I was a kid because at that time I'm very curious about something to do research and especially for my project time, I went there.

✓ Absolutely. I visited the library when I was a kid because at that time I was very curious about doing research, and especially during my project time, I went there.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I'm' should be 'I was' to match the past context. Also, 'something to do research' should be 'doing research'. 'Your library' is inappropriate; it should be 'the library'.

× It's a tricky question for me because I don't know quite much about Chinese habits. So if if they want to learn something and they go to the library, if do not, they won't go.

✓ It's a tricky question for me because I don't know much about Chinese habits. So if they want to learn something, they go to the library; if not, they won't go.

The sentence has repeated 'if' and missing subject in 'if do not'. Also, 'quite much' is incorrect; it should be 'much'. The pronoun usage and sentence structure need correction for clarity.