Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains contradictory statements about the accuracy of information online. To improve, make your opinion clear and avoid redundancy. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'the information are' to 'the information is'. Try to keep your answer concise and coherent.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I find books more reliable than online sources. For example, online information can sometimes be inaccurate or misleading, so I prefer checking facts in books.

Suggestion: Your answer covers the question but could be more structured and fluent. Avoid filler words like 'Umm' and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, correct informal phrases like 'gonna' to 'going to' and pluralise nouns properly, e.g., 'recipes'.

Example: When I visit the library, I usually look for books that can teach me something. For instance, I search for travel guides if I plan to visit a new place, or cookbooks when I want to try new recipes. Sometimes, I also borrow fiction books to enjoy reading at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating 'go to the library' and vary your vocabulary. Try to be more concise and precise.

Example: Yes, I used to visit the library near my home regularly when I was a child. I was lucky to go there before and after school, as well as on weekends, which allowed me to read many books.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors such as 'go from to the library' and 'they are very educated country'. To improve, express uncertainty politely and avoid awkward phrasing. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I'm not certain whether Chinese children often visit libraries since I haven't met many. However, I hope they do because China places great importance on education.

× I believe the information are more accurate when online.

✓ I believe the information is more accurate when online.

The word 'information' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular. Therefore, the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are' to agree with the singular noun.

× If you look for information online, you may come across false information.

✓ If you look for information online, you may come across false information.

This sentence is correct in terms of preposition use; no correction needed here.

× When I go to the library, I usually look for books that gonna teach me something.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually look for books that are going to teach me something.

The phrase 'gonna' is informal and incorrect in formal speech or writing. It should be replaced with 'are going to' to correctly express the future intention.

× Umm, mostly information about the words if I have to travel somewhere, information about cooking for example if I'm looking for new recipe or just simple fiction books so I can read at home.

✓ Umm, mostly information about the world if I have to travel somewhere, information about cooking for example if I'm looking for new recipes or just simple fiction books so I can read at home.

The word 'words' seems to be a typo and should be 'world' to make sense. Also, 'recipe' should be plural 'recipes' because it refers to multiple possible recipes.

× Yes, I did go to the library when I was a kid, the library was in my street.

✓ Yes, I did go to the library when I was a kid; the library was on my street.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to a street; 'on' is the correct preposition to indicate location along a street.

× I'm not sure if Chinese kids go from to the library as I am French and I don't know any Chinese kids but I'm hoping that they go to the library very often as they are very educated country.

✓ I'm not sure if Chinese kids go to the library as I am French and I don't know any Chinese kids but I'm hoping that they go to the library very often as they are a very educated country.

The phrase 'go from to the library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. Also, 'very educated country' needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.