Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai về giới từ và động từ. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ như sử dụng 'I often go to the library twice a week because reading books is my hobby.'

Example: Yes, I often go to the library twice a week because reading books is my favorite hobby.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác và cụ thể hơn, ví dụ như 'I usually read various kinds of books such as literature and stories, and I also study there.'

Example: I usually read different kinds of books, such as literature and short stories, and I also spend time studying at the library.

Suggestion: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và nói tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ: 'Yes, I sometimes went to the library with my sister when I was a kid, and I often read humorous stories there.'

Example: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library with my sister, and I enjoyed reading humorous stories there.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'a peaceful place' thay vì 'a peace place' và dùng số nhiều cho danh từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ: 'Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a peaceful place with many books that help expand their knowledge.'

Example: Yes, Chinese children often visit libraries because they are peaceful places filled with many books that help expand their knowledge.

× I often go to library twice a week to reading books become reading books is my hobby.

✓ I often go to the library twice a week to read books because reading books is my hobby.

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'library' which is necessary when referring to a specific place. Also, 'to reading' is incorrect; the verb after 'to' should be in base form 'read'. The phrase 'become reading books is my hobby' is incorrect; it should be 'because reading books is my hobby' to show cause.

× I often go to library twice a week to reading books become reading books is my hobby.

✓ I often go to the library twice a week to read books because reading books is my hobby.

After 'to' as a preposition indicating purpose, the verb should be in base form 'read', not gerund 'reading'.

× sometimes I often go to the library to reading books, uh, many kinds of books such as, umm, literature or story, uh, smiling story, uh, and, and I still study at the library.

✓ Sometimes I often go to the library to read books, many kinds of books such as literature or stories, including funny stories, and I also study at the library.

Again, 'to reading' should be 'to read'. 'Story' should be plural 'stories' when referring to multiple. 'Smiling story' is incorrect; likely meant 'funny stories'. 'Still study' is better as 'also study' to indicate addition.

× sometimes I often go to the library to reading books, uh, many kinds of books such as, umm, literature or story, uh, smiling story, uh, and, and I still study at the library.

✓ Sometimes I often go to the library to read books, many kinds of books such as literature or stories, including funny stories, and I also study at the library.

The verb after 'to' should be base form 'read', not gerund 'reading'.

× many kinds of books such as, umm, literature or story, uh, smiling story

✓ many kinds of books such as literature or stories, including funny stories

When referring to multiple items, the noun should be plural 'stories' instead of singular 'story'. 'Smiling story' is not a correct phrase; 'funny stories' is more appropriate.

× I sometimes go to a library when I was a kid with my, uh, uh, sister, she often go to there to study and she take me go to there together and I often, uh, reading, uh, humor story in there.

✓ I sometimes went to a library when I was a kid with my sister. She often went there to study and she took me there together, and I often read humorous stories there.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past time 'when I was a kid'. Past tense verbs 'went', 'went', 'took', and 'read' are needed. 'Reading' should be 'read' to match past tense. 'Humor story' should be 'humorous stories'.

× she often go to there to study

✓ she often goes there to study

For third person singular subjects like 'she', the verb should have an 's' ending: 'goes' instead of 'go'.

× she take me go to there together

✓ she took me there together

The verb 'take' should be in past tense 'took' to match the past time frame. Also, 'go to there' is redundant; 'there' alone suffices.

× I often, uh, reading, uh, humor story in there.

✓ I often read humorous stories there.

After 'often', the base form of the verb 'read' is used, not the gerund 'reading'. 'Humor story' should be 'humorous stories'.

× library is a peace place and it has many kinds of book help people to expand their knowledge.

✓ The library is a peaceful place and it has many kinds of books that help people expand their knowledge.

'Library' needs the definite article 'The' when referring to a specific place. 'Peace' should be the adjective 'peaceful'. 'Book' should be plural 'books'. Also, 'help people to expand' is better as 'help people expand'.