Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with clear reasons. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I often visit the library on weekends after finishing my chores and college work. I enjoy meeting new people there, which helps me build good connections. Additionally, I like to read books that improve my knowledge.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by avoiding filler words and grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect ideas. Be more specific about the types of books and activities.

Example: In the library, I usually meet new people to improve my communication skills. Also, I enjoy reading religious books because they give me peace and help me learn more about my culture.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, explain how storybooks helped you more specifically.

Example: Yes, I used to visit the library as a child. I loved reading storybooks with colorful pictures, which fascinated me. Moreover, these books helped me improve my vocabulary and language skills.

Suggestion: It's good to be honest if you don't know, but try to avoid unclear phrases like 'I heard some weird'. Instead, express your opinion clearly and use linking words to organize your answer. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure are important.

Example: I'm not sure about this, but I think many Chinese children enjoy reading science books. For example, they might be interested in topics like the human body and medicine, learning how medicines are made and their benefits.

× Yes, I often go to the library during my weekends after finishing my house tours and college stuff too.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library on my weekends after finishing my house chores and college stuff too.

The preposition 'during' is incorrectly used with 'my weekends'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to specific days or periods like weekends. Also, 'house tours' seems incorrect in context; likely intended 'house chores'.

× I love to go there especially I get a chance to meet new folks to build healthy connections with them, to them.

✓ I love to go there especially because I get a chance to meet new folks and build healthy connections with them.

The phrase 'to them' is redundant and incorrect here. Also, the sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the clauses properly; adding 'because' clarifies the reason.

× Additionally, I love to pick those books which enhance my.

✓ Additionally, I love to pick those books which enhance my knowledge.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'knowledge' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Well, there are several activities to do in library.

✓ Well, there are several activities to do in the library.

The phrase 'in library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The correct phrase is 'in the library'.

× Personally, I prefer to go to library to build connections with new individuals, uh, which helps me to improve my communication skills.

✓ Personally, I prefer to go to the library to build connections with new individuals, which helps me to improve my communication skills.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. It should be 'go to the library'.

× Additionally, I love to read the books related to religious, which gives me peace and enhance my knowledge in my culture.

✓ Additionally, I love to read books related to religion, which gives me peace and enhances my knowledge of my culture.

The adjective 'religious' is incorrectly used; the noun 'religion' is appropriate here. Also, subject-verb agreement requires 'enhances' instead of 'enhance'. The preposition 'in' should be 'of' when referring to knowledge about culture.

× I love to read the story books which fascinates me a lot through the 3D pictures and drawings.

✓ I loved to read story books which fascinated me a lot through the 3D pictures and drawings.

Since the context is past ('when I was a kid'), the verbs should be in past tense: 'loved' and 'fascinated'. Also, 'story books' is better as 'storybooks' or 'story books' without 'the'.

× Additionally, they help me to set apart from others because it really builds my vocabulary and standings framing more.

✓ Additionally, they helped me to stand apart from others because they really built my vocabulary and sentence framing skills.

The phrase 'set apart' should be 'stand apart'. 'It' is unclear and should be 'they' referring to the books. 'Standings framing' is incorrect; likely intended 'sentence framing'. Also, past tense is appropriate here.

× I don't have any idea about this.

✓ I don't have any idea about that.

The phrase 'any idea about this' is less natural in this context; 'about that' is more appropriate when referring to a previously mentioned topic.

× However, I remember I heard some weird that Chinese students love to read the books which are related to the science.

✓ However, I remember I heard something weird that Chinese students love to read books related to science.

The phrase 'heard some weird' is incorrect; it should be 'heard something weird'. Also, 'the books which are related to the science' is better as 'books related to science' without 'the'.

× Especially they are very keen in human body and the medicines, how they how the medicines are prepared and the benefits of that.

✓ Especially, they are very keen on the human body and medicines, how medicines are prepared, and their benefits.

The preposition 'keen in' should be 'keen on'. The phrase 'how they how the medicines' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'how medicines are prepared'. 'The benefits of that' is better as 'their benefits'.