Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and organise your ideas more clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I sometimes go to the library, especially when I was bored as a child and went with my dad. However, now that I am busy studying, I don't have much time to visit the library often.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repeating the same information.

Example: When I visit the library, I usually read novels, especially romantic stories about childhood sweethearts. I enjoy reading there because it is quiet and peaceful.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to use past tense when talking about the past and express your ideas clearly. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases.

Example: I didn't often go to the library when I was a child. Therefore, I don't have many childhood memories related to the library.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat contradictory and unclear. Try to give a direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid confusing statements.

Example: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library. It is usually very quiet there because students want to study without distractions.

× I sometimes goes but I sometimes don't and when I was a little bit boring I go with my dad.

✓ I sometimes go but I sometimes don't and when I was a little bit bored I went with my dad.

The verb 'goes' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I'; it should be 'go' (third person singular issue). Also, 'boring' should be 'bored' to correctly describe the feeling. Additionally, 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was'.

× But now I'm studying I don't really have any time to go so maybe it's not so often.

✓ But now I'm studying, I don't really have any time to go, so maybe I don't go so often.

The sentence needs clarity and proper tense consistency. 'Maybe it's not so often' is unclear; changing to 'maybe I don't go so often' fits the context better.

× When I go to the library, I usually read some novel books about love and something else, maybe some childhood sweethearts, and I just often read in the library sometimes, but I didn't often go to the library.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually read some novels about love and other topics, maybe about childhood sweethearts, and I often read in the library, but I didn't go to the library often before.

'Novel books' is incorrect; 'novels' is the correct plural noun. 'Just often read' and 'sometimes' together are redundant; 'often' or 'sometimes' should be used appropriately. The past tense phrase 'didn't often go' should be clarified as 'didn't go often before' for better clarity.

× Actually, I don't really go to the library. I don't often go to the library when I was a kid, but now I grow up, I sometimes girls.

✓ Actually, I didn't really go to the library. I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid, but now I have grown up, I sometimes go with girls.

The present tense 'don't' is incorrect when referring to past time 'when I was a kid'; it should be past tense 'didn't'. 'Now I grow up' should be 'now I have grown up' to indicate completed action. 'I sometimes girls' is incomplete and unclear; likely intended 'I sometimes go with girls'.

× Oh, of course, there are many students in the library every time, and they are very quiet in the library, because we all want to talk in the library, you know?

✓ Oh, of course, there are many students in the library all the time, and they are very quiet in the library, because we all don't want to talk in the library, you know?

'Every time' is incorrect; 'all the time' is the correct phrase. The sentence says 'because we all want to talk', which contradicts 'they are very quiet'; it should be 'we all don't want to talk' to make sense.

× And yes, they often go to the library, but why go to the library? I see them, but I don't often go there.

✓ And yes, they often go to the library, but why do I go to the library? I see them, but I don't often go there.

The question 'why go to the library?' is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' for present tense questions; it should be 'why do I go to the library?' for correct grammar.