Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Votre réponse manque de fluidité et de structure claire. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus naturelles et évitez les erreurs grammaticales. Par exemple, utilisez le présent simple pour les habitudes et précisez les détails avec des mots de liaison.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I love reading. I usually visit about twice a week to borrow new books. Although the library is small, it has a wide variety of books that interest me.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est correcte mais un peu courte. Pour améliorer, ajoutez des détails spécifiques et utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus naturelle.

Example: I usually borrow books from the library, about one book per week. Besides borrowing, I sometimes spend time reading quietly there to enjoy the peaceful environment.

Suggestion: La réponse contient des erreurs grammaticales et manque de clarté. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire et des détails précis, en évitant les phrases incomplètes.

Example: When I was a kid, I couldn't go to the library often because I lived in the countryside and the library was far away in the city. Therefore, it was difficult for me to visit regularly.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est confuse et contient des erreurs de vocabulaire. Pour améliorer, utilisez un vocabulaire approprié et structurez votre réponse avec des phrases claires et cohérentes.

Example: I believe many Chinese children often go to the library because they are eager to learn. Libraries provide them with valuable resources to improve their knowledge and skills.

× I went a lot to libraries as book lover.

✓ I went to libraries a lot as a book lover.

The adverb 'a lot' should be placed after the verb phrase 'went to libraries' for correct word order in English.

× I went a lot to libraries as book lover.

✓ I went a lot to libraries as a book lover.

The phrase 'book lover' needs an article 'a' before it because it is a singular countable noun.

× I read a lot during my part time and I went to the library almost 20 week.

✓ I read a lot during my part-time and I went to the library almost 20 weeks.

The phrase 'part time' should be hyphenated as 'part-time' when used as an adjective. Also, 'week' should be plural 'weeks' because it refers to multiple weeks.

× Actually it is a little bit small library but it contained a lot of books.

✓ Actually, it is a little bit small library but it contains a lot of books.

The sentence is missing a comma after 'Actually'. Also, 'contained' should be 'contains' to match the present tense description. Additionally, 'a little bit small library' is awkward; better to say 'a small library' or 'a little small library' but this is style rather than grammar.

× Actually it is a little bit small library but it contained a lot of books.

✓ Actually, it is a little small library but it contains a lot of books.

The verb 'contained' is past tense but the sentence describes a current state, so it should be 'contains' in present tense.

× I usually borrow books from the library.

✓ I usually borrow books from the library.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× It's about one book per week.

✓ It's about one book per week.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× When I was a kid, I was not able to go to the library because I lived in the countryside while the library was in the city.

✓ When I was a kid, I was not able to go to the library because I lived in the countryside while the library was in the city.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× It was kind a little bit distance from our home.

✓ It was kind of a little bit distant from our home.

The phrase 'kind a little bit distance' is incorrect. It should be 'kind of a little bit distant' to correctly use the adjective 'distant' and the phrase 'kind of'.

× So going there was a big problem for me and I tend to live to read my.

✓ So going there was a big problem for me and I tended to live reading at home.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I tend to live to read my' is incorrect. It should be 'I tended to stay home to read' or 'I tended to read at home.' The verb tense should be past to match the context.

× I think Chinese kids are often going to the library due to their fascinating capacity of knowledge.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library due to their fascinating capacity for knowledge.

The phrase 'are often going' is present continuous but 'often' suggests habitual action, so simple present 'often go' is better. Also, 'capacity of knowledge' should be 'capacity for knowledge'.

× They are a very knowledge to people in the community.

✓ They are very knowledgeable people in the community.

'Knowledge' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed. 'Knowledgeable' is the correct adjective. Also, the sentence structure is corrected to 'very knowledgeable people'.

× So yes, I guess that they are going to the library a lot and often.

✓ So yes, I guess that they go to the library a lot and often.

The phrase 'are going' is present continuous but 'a lot and often' indicate habitual action, so simple present 'go' is more appropriate.