Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use the past tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly address the question. For example, say "I don't often go to the library now because of my work, but I used to enjoy going when I was a child and in high school because I love reading books."

Example: I don't often go to the library now because of my work, but I used to enjoy going when I was a child and in high school because I love reading books.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Avoid repeating words like "novels" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I usually read fantasy novels in the library because they allow me to imagine different worlds. However, I rarely study my lessons there."

Example: I usually read fantasy novels in the library because they allow me to imagine different worlds. However, I rarely study my lessons there.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I did. Actually, my neighbor, who loved reading, taught me how to enjoy books and we used to go to the library together after school."

Example: Yes, I did. Actually, my neighbor, who loved reading, taught me how to enjoy books and we used to go to the library together after school.

Suggestion: Your answer is uncertain and contains some awkward phrasing. Try to express your opinion clearly and avoid vague statements. For example, "I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese children go to the library because reading is an important part of their culture."

Example: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese children go to the library because reading is an important part of their culture.

× No, I didn't, but I used to go when I was a kid and I went to them and high high school and I really enjoy it because I love reading books.

✓ No, I didn't, but I used to go when I was a kid and I went to them and high school and I really enjoyed it because I loved reading books.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the speaker talks about past habits and experiences, 'enjoy' and 'love' should be in past tense 'enjoyed' and 'loved' to maintain tense consistency.

× But nowadays because of my work, I couldn't go to live.

✓ But nowadays, because of my work, I can't go to the library.

The phrase 'go to live' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'go to the library'. Also, 'couldn't' implies past inability, but 'nowadays' suggests present, so 'can't' is more appropriate.

× I went to them and high high school

✓ I went to them and high school

The phrase 'them and high high school' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or misuse. It should be 'the library and high school' or just 'high school'. The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used here.

× So I always read notes.

✓ So I always read novels.

The word 'notes' is likely a mispronunciation or misuse; contextually, 'novels' fits better as the student talks about reading novels and fantasy books.

× I barely read study my lessons but.

✓ I barely study my lessons though.

The phrase 'read study my lessons' is incorrect. It should be 'study my lessons'. Also, 'but' at the end is incomplete; 'though' fits better to contrast the previous statement.

× she told, she taught me, she told me how to go to library, how to read books, how to enjoy the big world of books.

✓ She told me, she taught me how to go to the library, how to read books, and how to enjoy the big world of books.

The repetition of 'she told' is redundant. Also, 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× And we had these habits that we go to library after school together.

✓ And we had this habit of going to the library after school together.

'Had these habits that we go' is awkward. It should be 'had this habit of going'. Also, 'go to library' needs 'the' before 'library'.

× I don't know really, but they must do because Chinese are so clever and I think it's an custom for them to go to the library when they are kids.

✓ I don't really know, but they must do because Chinese people are so clever and I think it's a custom for them to go to the library when they are kids.

'An custom' is incorrect; 'custom' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a custom' is correct. Also, 'Chinese' should be 'Chinese people' for clarity.