Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "usually often" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with linking words like "because" or "so".

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy learning new things. It is a peaceful place where I can focus, and I like the quiet environment that helps me concentrate.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain your activities in the library. Avoid vague phrases like "do something try to unique" and focus on specific actions you take there.

Example: In the library, I usually look for interesting books and spend time reading them. This helps me gain new knowledge and improve my understanding of different subjects.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary fillers like "uh". Also, clarify your reasons with proper linking words. For example, explain that there were no library facilities or transport available in your village when you were a child.

Example: No, I did not go to the library as a child because there were no library facilities or transportation available in my village at that time.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating phrases like "in my point of view" and fillers such as "uh". Also, be careful when giving opinions about groups you are not familiar with. Use linking words to structure your answer logically.

Example: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I think they might not go to the library often because they focus more on learning their language and culture.

× Yeah, I love to go library and I usually often go to library as well because I, I'm very enthusiastic to learn new things, new books.

✓ Yeah, I love to go to the library and I usually often go to the library as well because I, I'm very enthusiastic to learn new things, new books.

The preposition 'to' is required before 'library' to indicate the destination. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× So it it keeps me at peace.

✓ So it keeps me at peace.

The phrase 'keeps me at peace' is correct, but the repeated 'it' is a typographical error and should be removed for clarity.

× And there also everything has a meaning right there.

✓ And everything there also has a meaning, right?

The sentence structure is awkward. Moving 'there' after 'everything' and adding a comma before 'right' improves clarity and correctness.

× So it is silent. So I like to go to.

✓ So it is silent, so I like to go there.

The sentence is incomplete; 'go to' requires an object. Adding 'there' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I usually do something try to unique every day and that keeps me a different knowledge.

✓ I usually try to do something unique every day and that gives me different knowledge.

The phrase 'try to unique' is incorrect; 'unique' is an adjective and should describe a noun. Also, 'keeps me a different knowledge' is incorrect; 'gives me different knowledge' is appropriate.

× So I basically go and I be afraid and after that I search for the books that I wanted and I started to read it.

✓ So I basically go and I am afraid, and after that I search for the books that I want and I start to read them.

The phrase 'I be afraid' is incorrect; it should be 'I am afraid'. 'Books that I wanted' should be present tense 'want' to match the context. 'Started' should be 'start' to maintain present tense. 'Read it' should be 'read them' because 'books' is plural.

× No, I haven't gone when I was a kid to the library because there was no, any facilities like, uh, library football and as well as no any, uh, vehicles facility that was in my village at that current situation.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there were no facilities like a library, football, or vehicle services in my village at that time.

'Haven't gone' is incorrect with 'when I was a kid'; simple past 'didn't go' is appropriate. 'There was no, any facilities' is incorrect; 'there were no facilities' is correct. 'Library football' is unclear; likely meant 'a library, football'. 'Vehicles facility' should be 'vehicle services'. 'At that current situation' is awkward; 'at that time' is better.

× So I didn't, uh, go to library when I was a kid.

✓ So I didn't go to the library when I was a kid.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place.

× In my point of view, uh, I haven't, uh, ID, I have no idea about these Chinese kids.

✓ In my point of view, I have no idea about these Chinese kids.

'I haven't, uh, ID' is unclear and incorrect; it should be removed for clarity.

× And in my point of view, uh, they don't go to the library because the more important is their languages and their cultures.

✓ And in my point of view, they don't go to the library because their languages and cultures are more important.

The phrase 'the more important is' is incorrect; it should be 'are more important' to agree with plural subject 'languages and cultures'.

× So I think they didn't go to library.

✓ So I think they don't go to the library.

Since the question is about habitual action, present tense 'don't go' is appropriate. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library'.