Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some unnatural phrases and filler words. Avoid using invented words like 'biblified' and reduce hesitation sounds like 'uh'. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural by removing redundancy and improving grammar.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books. I usually visit daily to study and also to relax my mind in a quiet environment.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors and repetitions. Avoid repeating words and be more specific about your activities. Also, talking loudly or playing video games may not be typical library behavior, so consider more appropriate activities. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: In the library, I usually read books and sometimes use the computer for research. Additionally, I enjoy discussing topics quietly with friends to relax my mind.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite disorganized and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words and be more specific about your experiences. Use past tense correctly and link your ideas coherently.

Example: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library with my mother. I enjoyed reading storybooks and alphabet books, and sometimes I played quietly with my friends there.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains hesitations and repetitions. Try to avoid filler words and be more confident in your response. Provide more specific information or examples if possible, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Although I don't have much personal experience, I saw a video last month showing that Chinese children often visit libraries to read books and spend time with their friends. Therefore, I believe they enjoy going to the library.

× I love to go to a library for reading the books.

✓ I love to go to the library for reading books.

The definite article 'the' is used before 'library' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'books' should be plural without 'the' when speaking generally.

× So on my daily basis I usually uh, go to library for my study purposes as well as to relax my mind.

✓ So on my daily basis I usually go to the library for my study purposes as well as to relax my mind.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place the speaker regularly visits.

× In the library I do various activity, for example read a, read a book and and also I like to play with a computer like video games etcetera.

✓ In the library I do various activities, for example, read a book and also I like to play computer games like video games, etc.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'various'. Also, 'play with a computer like video games' is awkward; 'play computer games like video games' is clearer.

× Apart from this I like to talk with the with the individual to relax my mind.

✓ Apart from this I like to talk with individuals to relax my mind.

'The individual' is incorrect here; 'individuals' (plural) is appropriate when speaking generally.

× As far as I know, when I was a kid, then I use uh, then I used to go library with my mother as I play with my uh, as I played with my friends as well as with the toy.

✓ As far as I know, when I was a kid, I used to go to the library with my mother, and I played with my friends as well as with toys.

Past tense 'used to' is correct for habitual past actions. 'Go library' needs the preposition 'to'. 'Play' should be past tense 'played'. 'The toy' should be plural 'toys' without 'the' when speaking generally.

× Apart from this, I usually uh, read a story book and some alphabetic book.

✓ Apart from this, I usually read story books and some alphabet books.

'Story book' and 'alphabetic book' should be plural 'story books' and 'alphabet books' when speaking generally. 'Alphabetic' is better replaced with 'alphabet' as an adjective.

× So I think that when I was a kid then I like to go to library.

✓ So I think that when I was a kid, I liked to go to the library.

Past tense 'liked' is needed to match 'when I was a kid'. The definite article 'the' is required before 'library'. Also, a comma improves sentence clarity.

× Well, I don't have enough experience about the Chinese kids, but one of the videos that I saw in a previous, uh, month that the Chinese, uh, kids also like to visit the library to read the books and to enjoy, to enjoy playing with their friend.

✓ Well, I don't have enough experience with Chinese kids, but one of the videos that I saw last month showed that Chinese kids also like to visit the library to read books and enjoy playing with their friends.

'Experience about' should be 'experience with'. 'In a previous month' is better as 'last month'. 'The Chinese kids' can be 'Chinese kids' when speaking generally. 'The books' should be 'books' without 'the'. 'Their friend' should be plural 'friends'.

× So I think that they like to go to library.

✓ So I think that they like to go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place.