Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、表現が不自然で冗長です。"commit the library"は誤用で、"visit the library"が適切です。また、理由を簡潔に述べ、より自然な英語表現を使うことが望ましいです。

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I need a quiet place to work on my graduation paper.

Suggestion: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。内容が断片的で、論理的なつながりが不足しています。具体的に何をしているのかを明確にし、文を整理して話す練習が必要です。

Example: Usually, I study English skills in the library instead of reading books. Recently, I have been preparing for tests and also studying math.

Suggestion: 過去の習慣を述べていますが、時制の使い方に誤りがあります。"usually go"は現在形なので、過去の話には"usually went"を使うべきです。また、"so much"の位置や使い方も改善が必要です。

Example: No, I didn't. When I was a child, I usually went to the soccer club, so I didn't go to the library very often.

Suggestion: 内容は伝わりますが、文法と語彙の誤りが多く、冗長です。"I'm not familiar with this topic because I'm Japanese"のように正しく表現し、比較の表現も自然にする必要があります。

Example: I'm not very familiar with this topic because I'm Japanese. However, I think Chinese children often go to the library because they have to study more than Japanese children.

× I need to commit the library frequently.

✓ I need to visit the library frequently.

The verb 'commit' is incorrectly used with 'the library'. The correct verb to express going to a place regularly is 'visit'. Therefore, 'commit the library' should be corrected to 'visit the library'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually do study in my English skills rather than reading the books.

✓ I usually study my English skills rather than read books.

The phrase 'do study in my English skills' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'do' is unnecessary here. Also, 'reading the books' should be 'read books' to parallel the verb 'study'. The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and word order for clarity.

× For recent days I prepared for this.

✓ Recently, I have been preparing for this.

The phrase 'For recent days' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'Recently'. Also, the present perfect continuous tense 'have been preparing' is appropriate to indicate an action continuing up to now.

× I used test and.

✓ I used tests.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Assuming the student means they used tests for preparation, the corrected sentence is 'I used tests.' This is a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× I studied maths.

✓ I studied math.

In English, 'math' is the common term in American English, while 'maths' is British English. However, 'maths' is plural in form but treated as singular. To avoid confusion, 'math' is preferred here. Also, 'math' is uncountable, so no plural form is needed.

× I usually go to the soccer club when I was in childhood, so I didn't go to the library so much.

✓ I usually went to the soccer club when I was a child, so I didn't go to the library much.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a child'. Also, 'in childhood' is unnatural; 'when I was a child' is correct. 'So much' at the end is better as 'much' for negative sentences.

× I'm not familiar to this kind of topic because Japanese.

✓ I'm not familiar with this kind of topic because I'm Japanese.

The correct preposition with 'familiar' is 'with', not 'to'. Also, the sentence lacks the subject 'I am' before 'Japanese'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects preposition use.

× they have to study very more other than Japanese people.

✓ they have to study much more than Japanese people.

The phrase 'very more' is incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'much more'. Also, 'other than' should be 'than' to make a comparison. The corrected sentence uses proper quantifiers and comparison structure.

× these kids are very often go to the library.

✓ these kids very often go to the library.

The auxiliary verb 'are' is unnecessary here and causes grammatical error. The correct sentence omits 'are' to properly use the adverb 'very often' with the verb 'go'.