Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「I want to go to the library to I study」は「I want to go to the library to study」や「I go to the library to study」と言い換えるべきです。また、同じ単語の繰り返し（"makes makes"）は避けましょう。より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけてください。

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me concentrate better when I study.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りと冗長な表現が目立ちます。例えば、「I was studying」より「I usually study」が適切です。また、「I and I reading a book」などの繰り返しは避け、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

Example: I usually study in the library and enjoy reading books, especially novels.

Suggestion: 意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。「I got the library」は不自然で、「I went to the library」が正しいです。また、「I lead a picture of book like for example Nikon」は意味不明なので、具体的にどんな本を読んだかを明確に述べましょう。

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often went to the library and enjoyed reading picture books, such as those about animals.

Suggestion: 質問に対して明確に答えられていません。また、文法的な誤りや不完全な文があります。例えば、「I when I was child I would」は不完全です。質問に対して自分の意見や知識を簡潔に述べ、文を完結させましょう。

Example: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I know that Japanese kids often go to the library to study and read books.

× Yes, I want to go to the library to I study.

✓ Yes, I want to go to the library to study.

The phrase 'to I study' is incorrect because after 'to' (a preposition or part of an infinitive), the base form of the verb should be used without a subject pronoun. The correct form is 'to study'.

× Studying in library makes makes me concentrate.

✓ Studying in the library makes me concentrate.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before singular countable nouns is incorrect.

× I was studying in the library, I usually studying in library and I and I reading a book.

✓ I usually study in the library and I read books.

The sentence mixes past continuous 'was studying' with present habitual actions. Also, 'I usually studying' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually study'. 'I and I reading a book' is ungrammatical and should be 'I read books'.

× I usually studying in library and I and I reading a book.

✓ I usually study in the library and I read books.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, verb forms need correction as explained above.

× Reading a book is. I like reading books especially.

✓ I especially like reading books.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence is a complete and clear statement expressing preference.

× I got the library when I was a child.

✓ I went to the library when I was a child.

The verb 'got' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is visiting the library, so 'went to the library' is appropriate past tense usage.

× I I lead a picture of book like for example Nikon.

✓ I liked picture books, for example, 'Nikon'.

The sentence has repeated pronouns and incorrect verb form 'lead' instead of past tense 'liked'. Also, 'picture of book' is incorrect; it should be 'picture books'.

× I when I was child I would.

✓ When I was a child, I would go to the library.

The modal verb 'would' needs a main verb to complete the meaning. The sentence is incomplete and needs a verb phrase after 'would'.