Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cavabınızda daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin və cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qısa edin. Məsələn, "Yes, I often go to the library near Sahel metro station." kimi sadə və aydın ifadə istifadə edin.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library near Sahel metro station because it is quiet and has many books.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha təbii və məntiqli qurun. Məsələn, "I usually read books in the library because it is a quiet place for studying." kimi ifadələr istifadə edin.

Example: I usually read books in the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus on my studies.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin, təkrarlardan qaçının. Məsələn, "I didn't go to the library as a child, but I started going when I was in 9th grade."

Example: I didn't go to the library when I was a child, but I started going when I was in 9th grade to study.

Suggestion: Cavabınızı daha konkret və məntiqli edin. Şəxsi fikrinizi ifadə edin və səbəb göstərin. Məsələn, "I think many Chinese kids go to the library because education is very important in China."

Example: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in their culture.

× Yes, I often go to the library and this library is treated in the Sahel near the Sahel metro station.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library and this library is located in the Sahel near the Sahel metro station.

The verb 'treated' is incorrectly used here. The correct verb to describe the location of the library is 'located'. 'Treated' means to deal with or handle something, which is not appropriate in this context.

× Actually I read books in the library because library is only reading only for reading books.

✓ Actually, I read books in the library because the library is only for reading books.

The definite article 'the' is missing before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, the phrase 'only reading only for reading books' is redundant and awkward; it should be simplified to 'only for reading books'.

× When I was a kid, I didn't. When I was a kid, I had never come to the library. But when I study at 9th grade grade, I start to I started to go.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't. When I was a kid, I had never been to the library. But when I studied in 9th grade, I started to go.

The past perfect 'had never come' is incorrect; the correct form is 'had never been' to indicate experience. Also, 'study' and 'start' should be in past tense 'studied' and 'started' to match the past time frame. The phrase '9th grade grade' is redundant; only one 'grade' is needed.

× Actually I don't, I don't have any ideas for this question, but I think yes, I guess. I guess that yes, because they are clever and they are very smart.

✓ Actually, I don't have any idea about this question, but I think yes, I guess. I guess that yes, because they are clever and very smart.

The phrase 'I don't' is incomplete and should be connected with the following phrase for clarity. 'Ideas' should be singular 'idea' when referring to a general thought. Also, 'any ideas for this question' is better expressed as 'any idea about this question'.