Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and using more natural expressions. For example, "Peace of Mind" should not be capitalized and the phrase "I can enjoy myself while reading the books" is a bit redundant after saying you feel relaxed. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I often visit the library in my free time because it helps me relax and enjoy reading. There is a library near my house called Subaya Library, which I visit two or three times a week.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good use of linking words. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid repeating similar words like "questions" and "doubts". Also, you can add a little more detail to make your answer more specific.

Example: When I visit the library, I usually search for books in my favorite genres like mystery and history. Moreover, I often consult various resources to clarify my study-related queries, which enhances my understanding and broadens my knowledge.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical errors and is a bit unclear. Try to use correct verb forms and simplify your sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, instead of "would not allow me visiting", say "would not allow me to visit". Try to be more concise and clear.

Example: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child because my parents did not allow me to visit. They thought I did not know how to use the library, so they taught me at home in the mornings and evenings.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains inappropriate expressions like "not a cup of my tea" which is informal and not suitable here. Also, some sentences are confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons using proper vocabulary and sentence structure.

Example: I am not sure, but I believe many Chinese children visit libraries because they are interested in learning English, which is widely used around the world. Libraries provide good resources to help them improve their language skills.

× I feel really relaxed and it gives me a Peace of Mind that I can enjoy myself while reading the books.

✓ I feel really relaxed and it gives me peace of mind that I can enjoy myself while reading books.

The phrase 'peace of mind' is an uncountable noun and should not be capitalized or preceded by 'a'. Also, 'the books' is incorrect here because it refers to books in general, so the article 'the' should be omitted.

× And there is a place near my house called Subaya Library where I visit two to three times.

✓ And there is a place near my house called Subaya Library where I visit two to three times a week.

The sentence lacks a time expression after 'two to three times' to specify the frequency. Adding 'a week' clarifies the meaning and corrects the prepositional usage.

× I feel really relaxed and it gives me a Peace of Mind that I can enjoy myself while reading the books.

✓ I feel really relaxed and it gives me peace of mind that I can enjoy myself while reading books.

The definite article 'the' before 'books' is unnecessary when referring to books in general. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Oh well, I did not used to go to the library when I was a kid because my parents would not allow me visiting the library because I don't have any kind of knowledge regarding what to do in the library, so they would taught me in my house in the morning and evening time.

✓ Oh well, I did not use to go to the library when I was a kid because my parents would not allow me to visit the library because I didn't have any knowledge regarding what to do in the library, so they would teach me at home in the morning and evening.

The phrase 'did not used to' should be 'did not use to' because 'did' is already past tense, so the base form 'use' is used. 'Allow me visiting' is incorrect; it should be 'allow me to visit' because 'allow' is followed by the infinitive. 'Don't have' should be 'didn't have' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Would taught' is incorrect; it should be 'would teach' because 'would' is followed by the base verb. 'In my house' is better expressed as 'at home' for naturalness.

× so they would taught me in my house in the morning and evening time.

✓ so they would teach me at home in the morning and evening.

The preposition 'in' is less natural here; 'at home' is the correct expression. Also, 'morning and evening time' is better as 'morning and evening' for conciseness.

× Uh, that's not a cup of my tea, but I think Chinese kids do visit the library because, uh, they are more fond of learning English language, especially because English is worldwide acceptable and as their primary language, science is not acceptable.

✓ Uh, that's not my cup of tea, but I think Chinese kids do visit the library because they are more fond of learning the English language, especially because English is widely accepted worldwide and as their primary language, science is not accepted.

The phrase 'not a cup of my tea' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'not my cup of tea'. 'Learning English language' should be 'learning the English language' because 'language' is countable and requires an article. 'English is worldwide acceptable' is awkward; 'English is widely accepted worldwide' is correct. 'Science is not acceptable' is unclear; 'science is not accepted' fits better in context.