Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınız doğal ve anlamlı ancak biraz uzun ve tekrarlayıcı. Daha kısa ve doğrudan cevap verip, destekleyici detayları bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

Example: I don't often go to the library because I prefer keeping my own books. This way, I can share them with my friends and discuss our opinions about the books we've read.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda anlam bozuklukları ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "Chicken for books" ifadesi yanlış kullanılmış. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve doğru kurmaya özen gösterin.

Example: I usually go to the library to read books for a while. However, I don't borrow books because returning them can be inconvenient for me.

Suggestion: Cümle yapılarınızda küçük dilbilgisi hataları var. "a employee" yerine "an employee" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, daha akıcı ve doğal cevaplar vermeye çalışın.

Example: Yes, when I was a kid, I had a friend named Akan whose mother was an employee at the library. I visited the library a few times to talk with her.

Suggestion: Cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "goes" yerine "go" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, cümleleri daha kısa ve net kurmaya çalışın.

Example: I have many Chinese friends, and they say that Chinese kids often go to the library not only to borrow books but also to study for their lessons and hobbies.

× Though I don't go to the library, I prefer keeping books for myself 'cause I can share my books with my friends and sometimes we can have a conversation about it and we can share our opinions about the books that we read together.

✓ Though I don't go to the library, I prefer to keep books for myself because I can share my books with my friends and sometimes we can have a conversation about them and share our opinions about the books that we read together.

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by the infinitive form 'to keep' rather than the gerund 'keeping'. Also, 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' in formal speech. Additionally, 'conversation about it' should be 'conversation about them' to correctly refer to 'books' (plural).

× I prefer chicken for books in library.

✓ I prefer choosing books in the library.

The phrase 'prefer chicken for books' is incorrect; likely 'chicken' is a typo for 'choosing'. Also, 'in library' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct: 'in the library'.

× I go there and I take some books and I read them for a while.

✓ I go there, take some books, and read them for a while.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable but can be improved by removing unnecessary conjunctions for smoother flow. No major preposition error here, but the sentence can be more concise.

× But I don't borrow from library cause returning it will be a hassle for me.

✓ But I don't borrow from the library because returning them will be a hassle for me.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'books'. 'Cause' should be replaced with 'because' for formality.

× Yes, when I was kid, I had a friend named Akan.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I had a friend named Akan.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'kid'.

× His mother was a employee in library, so I went there to talk with her mom a few times.

✓ His mother was an employee in the library, so I went there to talk with her a few times.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound in 'employee'. Also, 'in library' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Her mom' is informal and redundant since 'his mother' is already mentioned; 'her' suffices.

× I have lots of Chinese friends and according to their comments, I can confirm that lots of Chinese people and Chinese kids goes to the library not to only borrow books but also to study for their lessons and their hobbies.

✓ I have lots of Chinese friends and according to their comments, I can confirm that lots of Chinese people and Chinese kids go to the library not only to borrow books but also to study for their lessons and their hobbies.

The verb 'goes' should be 'go' to agree with the plural subject 'lots of Chinese people and Chinese kids'. Also, 'not to only borrow' should be 'not only to borrow' for correct word order.