Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to keep your response within 5 sentences, use correct tenses, and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: Yes, I often went to the library when I was in college because it had many books related to my subject. I spent most of my free time there as it helped me concentrate better and improve my knowledge.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and finish your sentences properly. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, use correct verb tenses consistently.

Example: When I was in college, I usually went to the library to read books related to my subject because it had a vast collection. I used to visit whenever I had free time to improve my understanding.

Suggestion: Your answer has some hesitation and informal fillers like 'uh'. Try to speak confidently and avoid fillers. Also, use consistent verb tenses and provide a clear, concise response with specific details.

Example: When I was a kid, I usually went to the library with my father on weekends because I was busy during weekdays. I enjoyed reading story books there as they were very interesting to me.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and does not provide any information. Even if you are unsure, try to give a general opinion or guess to show your speaking ability. Use polite phrases like 'I think' or 'In my opinion'.

Example: I am not sure, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a good place to study and read books.

× Yes, I often went to the library when I was in college where there I spent my free period mostly in the library because there are numerous books of my subject so that books helps me a lot and also there is concentration in the library.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was in college where I spent my free periods mostly in the library because there were numerous books on my subject so those books helped me a lot and also there was concentration in the library.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the action happened in the past (college time), verbs should be in past tense: 'are' to 'were', 'helps' to 'helped', 'is' to 'was'. Also, 'books' is plural, so 'that books' should be 'those books'. This correction maintains tense consistency and subject-verb agreement.

× So when I was in college, I went to the library for reading books of my subject because there is vast collection of books in the library related to my subject.

✓ So when I was in college, I went to the library to read books on my subject because there was a vast collection of books in the library related to my subject.

The sentence refers to past events, so present tense 'is' should be 'was'. Also, 'for reading' is better expressed as 'to read' for purpose. 'Books of my subject' should be 'books on my subject' for correct preposition use. 'Vast collection' needs an article 'a' before it.

× So whenever I get free time in the college, I went there and read that books and.

✓ So whenever I got free time in college, I went there and read those books.

The sentence mixes present tense 'get' with past tense 'went'. Since the context is past, 'get' should be 'got'. 'That books' is incorrect; it should be 'those books' for plural demonstrative adjective. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and', which is removed for clarity.

× When I was a kid, I went to library with my father usually on weekends because during weekdays I don't, uh, have that much time.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually went to the library with my father on weekends because during weekdays I didn't have that much time.

The sentence refers to past events, so 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the' as 'to the library'. The adverb 'usually' is better placed before the verb 'went'.

× So whenever I get time, I went to the library with my father in the evening time.

✓ So whenever I got time, I went to the library with my father in the evening.

The sentence mixes present tense 'get' with past tense 'went'. Both should be in past tense: 'got' and 'went'. 'In the evening time' is better expressed simply as 'in the evening'.

× And, uh, there I read story books because as a kid, uh, story books attracted.

✓ And, uh, there I read story books because, as a kid, story books attracted me.

The verb 'attracted' requires an object; 'story books attracted' is incomplete. Adding 'me' completes the sentence. The tense 'read' is correct past tense here.