Part 1
Examiner
Do you often go to the library?
Candidate
Yes, I do. I often go to the library three days a week.
Examiner
What do you usually do in the library?
Candidate
I usually borrow books to reading and and do my works and sometimes I I use Wi-Fi to. To to.
Examiner
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Candidate
Yes, I did when I was a kid. I like to go to the library to reading and thinking and use Wi-Fi to research.
Examiner
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Candidate
Yes, Chinese kids are often go to the library because whether in the school or in the hometown, there are also have Free Library to read.
Do you often go to the library?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且避免重复信息。
Example: Yes, I usually visit the library about three times a week to study and borrow books.
What do you usually do in the library?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复,表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明主要活动,并使用连词连接句子。
Example: I usually borrow books to read and do my homework there. Sometimes, I also use the Wi-Fi to research information.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式。
Example: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I enjoyed going to the library to read books, think quietly, and use the Wi-Fi for research.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 句子结构混乱,语法错误较多。建议简化句子,使用正确的语法,并提供具体原因。
Example: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because schools and communities usually have free libraries where they can read books.
× I usually borrow books to reading and and do my works and sometimes I I use Wi-Fi to. To to.
✓ I usually borrow books to read and do my work, and sometimes I use Wi-Fi too.
动词后面接动词不定式时,应该用动词原形而不是动名词。这里 'borrow books to reading' 应改为 'borrow books to read'。另外,'works' 应为不可数名词 'work','to to' 是多余的重复。
× Yes, I did when I was a kid. I like to go to the library to reading and thinking and use Wi-Fi to research.
✓ Yes, I did when I was a kid. I liked to go to the library to read, think, and use Wi-Fi to research.
动词不定式后应使用动词原形,'to reading' 应改为 'to read','thinking' 应改为 'think'。另外,时态应与过去时间状语一致,'like' 应改为过去式 'liked'。
× Yes, Chinese kids are often go to the library because whether in the school or in the hometown, there are also have Free Library to read.
✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because whether at school or in their hometown, there are also free libraries to read.
'are often go' 是主谓不一致,应改为 'often go'。'in the school' 应为 'at school','in the hometown' 应为 'in their hometown','there are also have' 结构错误,应为 'there are also'。'Free Library' 应为复数 'free libraries'。