Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "I do not usually go" and "whenever I get a chance I never miss the opportunity" which convey similar ideas. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I don't often visit the library, but when I do, I make sure to explore new books. For example, last week I went there with a friend to discover some interesting reads.

Suggestion: Your answer has some hesitation and repetition which affects fluency. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and be more specific about the types of work or books you read.

Example: Since the library is peaceful, I usually take my laptop and books there to complete my pending work. Additionally, when I feel bored, I read magazines, novels, or other interesting books available at the library.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and avoid phrases like 'never get a chance to go at that place once.' Also, use linking words to contrast ideas clearly.

Example: When I was a kid, there was no library in my hometown, so I never had the chance to visit one. However, during my school days, I usually went to the school library once or twice a week.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and some unclear expressions. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be more specific and avoid vague phrases like 'education system is very high.'

Example: As far as I know, education is highly valued in China, so many children visit the library once or twice a week. Some students even go daily, depending on their school and personal preferences.

× Sometimes when, uh, sometimes when I'm bored, I used to, I used to take some books and read them.

✓ Sometimes when, uh, sometimes when I'm bored, I take some books and read them.

The phrase 'used to' is incorrectly used here to describe a habitual action in the present. 'Used to' is for past habits. Since the speaker is talking about a current habit, the simple present tense 'take' is appropriate.

× As library is a peaceful and quiet place, I usually carry my laptop and my books with me to the library and do my pending works.

✓ As the library is a peaceful and quiet place, I usually carry my laptop and my books with me to the library and do my pending work.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' which is necessary when referring to a specific place. Also, 'pending works' is incorrect; 'work' is an uncountable noun here and should not be pluralized.

× When I was a kid, there was no library located in my hometown, so I never get a chance to go at that place once.

✓ When I was a kid, there was no library located in my hometown, so I never got a chance to go to that place even once.

The verb 'get' should be in the past tense 'got' to match the past time frame. Also, the preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'to' is the correct preposition to indicate movement towards a place.

× But in my school time I usually go to the school library once or twice in the week.

✓ But during my school time, I usually went to the school library once or twice a week.

The phrase 'in my school time' is better expressed as 'during my school time'. Since the speaker is referring to a past period, the verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went'. Also, 'in the week' should be 'a week' to indicate frequency.

× So I never get a chance to go at that place once.

✓ So I never got a chance to go to that place even once.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when indicating movement towards a place; 'to' is the correct preposition. Also, 'once' is better placed after 'even' for emphasis.

× It depends on a school, school to school where they belong.

✓ It depends on the school, school to school, where they belong.

The indefinite article 'a' is incorrect here; the definite article 'the' should be used when referring to specific schools. Also, the phrase 'school to school' is better set off by commas to clarify meaning.

× So it also depend on the on their personal choice.

✓ So it also depends on their personal choice.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the extra 'on the' is redundant and should be removed.