Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Та илүү байгалийн, үр дүнтэй хариулт өгөх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "No, I don't often go to the library because I have a busy schedule. However, I want to visit more often because it helps me concentrate and improve my study skills." гэж хэлж болно. Мөн "improving my S skills or subjects" гэдэг нь тодорхой бус учир илүү тодорхой үг хэрэглээрэй.

Example: No, I don't often go to the library because I have a busy schedule. However, I want to visit more often because it helps me concentrate and improve my study skills.

Suggestion: Хариулт тань цаг хугацааны хувьд буруу хэлэгдсэн байна. "I was preferring" биш "I preferred" гэж хэлэх хэрэгтэй. Мөн илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой хариулт өгнө үү. Жишээ нь, "I preferred studying in the library during my senior years because it was more efficient than studying at home."

Example: I preferred studying in the library during my senior years because it was more efficient than studying at home.

Suggestion: Хэлний алдааг засаж, илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой хариулт өгнө үү. "used to went" биш "used to go" гэж хэлэх хэрэгтэй. Мөн "novice" гэдэг үг буруу хэрэглэгдсэн байна. Жишээ нь, "No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but I used to go to the bookshelf area in my school to read many books about my subjects, fairy tales, or novels."

Example: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but I used to go to the bookshelf area in my school to read many books about my subjects, fairy tales, or novels.

Suggestion: Хэлний алдааг засаж, илүү байгалийн, үр дүнтэй хариулт өгнө үү. "are often go" биш "often go" гэж хэлэх хэрэгтэй. Мөн хариултыг богино, тодорхой, холбоотой болгоорой. Жишээ нь, "I have heard that Chinese kids often go to the library because their exams are very hard. They prefer the quiet environment to concentrate better."

Example: I have heard that Chinese kids often go to the library because their exams are very hard. They prefer the quiet environment to concentrate better.

× No, I don't often go to the library because I have busy schedule, but I want to go to the library often because it helps my concentrate and improving my S skills or subjects.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library because I have a busy schedule, but I want to go to the library often because it helps me concentrate and improve my skills or subjects.

The phrase 'busy schedule' requires the indefinite article 'a' because 'schedule' is a singular countable noun. 'My concentrate' is incorrect; the correct pronoun is 'me' followed by the verb 'concentrate'. Also, 'improving' should be in base form 'improve' to parallel 'helps me concentrate'. Use parallel verb forms after 'helps'. Suggestions: Use 'a busy schedule', 'helps me concentrate', and 'improve' to maintain correct grammar and parallel structure.

× No, I don't often go to the library because I have busy schedule, but I want to go to the library often because it helps my concentrate and improving my S skills or subjects.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library because I have a busy schedule, but I want to go to the library often because it helps me concentrate and improve my skills or subjects.

After 'helps', the verb should be in base form, not '-ing' form. 'Improving' is incorrect here; it should be 'improve' to match the structure 'helps me concentrate and improve'. Suggestion: Use base form verbs after 'helps' for correct grammar.

× I was preferring for my exams in my senior years due to the fact that it is more efficient than studying at my home.

✓ I preferred studying for my exams in my senior years because it was more efficient than studying at home.

The verb 'prefer' is a stative verb and is not usually used in the continuous form 'was preferring'. Also, 'preferring for' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'preferred studying'. 'Due to the fact that' can be simplified to 'because'. 'At my home' is better as 'at home'. Suggestion: Use simple past tense 'preferred' and correct prepositions for clarity and correctness.

× No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but however I used to went to bookshelf area of my school so I can read a lot of books about my subjects or fairy tales or novice something like that.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but I used to go to the bookshelf area of my school so I could read a lot of books about my subjects, fairy tales, or novels, something like that.

'Used to' is followed by the base form of the verb, so 'went' is incorrect; it should be 'go'. 'But however' is redundant; use either 'but' or 'however'. 'Bookshelf area' should be 'bookshelf area' or 'bookshelf section'. 'Novice' is incorrect; the correct word is 'novels'. 'So I can read' should be 'so I could read' to maintain past tense consistency. Suggestion: Use 'used to go', avoid redundant conjunctions, correct vocabulary, and maintain tense consistency.

× No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but however I used to went to bookshelf area of my school so I can read a lot of books about my subjects or fairy tales or novice something like that.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but I used to go to the bookshelf area of my school so I could read a lot of books about my subjects, fairy tales, or novels, something like that.

The pronoun 'I' is correct, but the phrase 'novice something like that' is incorrect; 'novice' is a noun meaning a beginner, not a type of book. The intended word is likely 'novels'. Also, 'so I can read' should be 'so I could read' to match past tense. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary and maintain pronoun and tense consistency.

× I was preferring for my exams in my senior years due to the fact that it is more efficient than studying at my home.

✓ I preferred studying for my exams in my senior years because it was more efficient than studying at home.

The phrase 'preferring for' is incorrect; 'prefer' is not followed by 'for'. Instead, use 'preferred studying for my exams'. Also, 'at my home' is better expressed as 'at home'. Suggestion: Use correct verb-preposition combinations and common expressions.

× I heard about that Chinese kids are often go to the library due to the fact that their exams are very hard, so they can concentrate in a quiet environment, so they choose a library.

✓ I heard that Chinese kids often go to the library because their exams are very hard, so they can concentrate in a quiet environment, and they choose a library.

The phrase 'are often go' is incorrect; 'go' should not be preceded by 'are' in this context. The correct form is 'often go'. Also, 'due to the fact that' can be simplified to 'because'. The conjunctions should be used properly; 'and' is better than repeating 'so'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms without unnecessary auxiliary verbs and simplify conjunctions for clarity.