Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some awkward phrases such as "become the root form" which is confusing. Try to use simpler and clearer expressions, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends when I have free time. I find it a quiet place where I can focus on my studies and complete assignments given by my professors.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words to make it coherent. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use a wider range of vocabulary.

Example: I usually study in the library because it has a quiet atmosphere that helps me concentrate. For example, I often review my notes and prepare for exams there, which makes my study time more effective.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but some sentences are a bit fragmented and repetitive. Try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words and avoid repeating similar points. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure.

Example: Yes, when I was a child, I loved going to the library with my mom every weekend. We attended events there, and I enjoyed borrowing books rather than buying them. I especially liked the old books that were kept in the library.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific.

Example: I think Chinese children rarely go to libraries because they are busy with extracurricular activities and exam preparation. Instead, many prefer to study at home or in coffee shops where they feel more comfortable.

× I try to go to the library regularly like in the weekends when I find a free time as a leisure activity.

✓ I try to go to the library regularly, like on weekends, when I find free time as a leisure activity.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to 'weekends'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'a free time' is incorrect because 'time' is uncountable here, so 'free time' without an article is correct.

× I go to the library and become the root form that I have been since I was a child and concentrate on the tasks that I have been given with from my professor.

✓ I go to the library and continue the habit that I have had since I was a child, concentrating on the tasks given to me by my professor.

The phrase 'become the root form' is unclear and incorrect. The sentence structure is confusing. It should express continuing a habit and concentrating on tasks. Also, 'given with from my professor' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'given to me by my professor'.

× As a kid, I was a big bookworm. I was a fan of libraries, so every weekends me and my mom went to the library for the events that were there.

✓ As a kid, I was a big bookworm. I was a fan of libraries, so every weekend my mom and I went to the library for the events that were there.

'Every weekends' is incorrect because 'every' is used with singular nouns; it should be 'every weekend'. Also, the pronoun order should be 'my mom and I' as the subject of the sentence.

× so every weekends me and my mom went to the library for the events that were there.

✓ so every weekend my mom and I went to the library for the events that were there.

The subject pronoun 'I' should be used instead of 'me' when it is the subject of the verb. Also, the order 'my mom and I' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× And I really adored borrowing books instead of buying them.

✓ I really adored borrowing books instead of buying them.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. Removing 'And' improves sentence flow and formality.

× And I loved the old books that were kept there and I was really considering to buy them.

✓ I loved the old books that were kept there, and I was really considering buying them.

The phrase 'considering to buy' is incorrect; the verb 'consider' is followed by a gerund ('buying'). Also, starting with 'And' is unnecessary.

× so every weekends me and my mom went to the library for the events that were there.

✓ so every weekend my mom and I went to the library for the events that were there.

'Every' should be followed by a singular noun, so 'weekends' should be 'weekend'.

× I believe because of the extracurricular programs that the schools have and the busy time and the time that children spend working hard on their exams, they can't afford time find time to go to libraries.

✓ I believe that because of the extracurricular programs that schools have, the busy schedules, and the time children spend working hard on their exams, they can't find time to go to libraries.

The phrase 'can't afford time find time' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'can't find time'. Also, 'the busy time' is better expressed as 'busy schedules' or 'busy times'.

× So no, because they prefer to study in coffee shops or at home.

✓ So no, because they prefer to study in coffee shops or at home.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.